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u are you in a det you are wrong about your house or your friends and the unicorns mostly in your life but they don't have a option for the last one or elders
why is this novel being dropped?
please update as soon as possible.
liked the story very much but the content is too less .hopefully waiting for the new releases
Anyone have the RAW's Name for this Book?
Hope this Book gets selected.. But I like the Plant MC more..
This Book comes Second.. and Doomsday comes Third for its idea of useing "Luck"..
For this book I hope MC purely cultivates himself.. since he is Old and should understand Human Greed and Nature.. so, Hopefully no Kindness/ Loli/ Old man Herrem
I really like the concept and plot line of this book, comparable to "Supernatural", already finished reading, waiting for more chapters.
Is this book fated to be incomplete?
I like the story, the only things I do not like are the facts that he is not the only reincarnation anymore and the stupid love triangle.
I seriously feel several chapters worth were wasted by introducing a love triangle as to me, they don't add anything to the story and it was too late in its introduction to make it help in drawing in a female crowd.
The romance aspect of the story is poorly constructed which just further lowers its value. I suppose it is done in an effort to do character building but it seems to have the opposite effect. The drama makes the MC seem more and more bland.
I do like how humanity isn't alone in the universe, and the way the story is set up to evolve from there, with infighting between factions and aliens.
I just finished reading the 40 chapters, and I have to say it's pretty good. If I have to nitpick It would be about the info dumb. Very recommended, and I hope it gets picked up.
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I really enjoyed this story.
The characters are cleverly constructed with an intimate knowledge of modern crime investigation that takes you on a journey into the dark corners of the human mind.
The Author has weaved multiple character viewpoints into a suspenseful and gripping tale, that will stay with you long after you have finished reading it.
I leave this review because I really like the novel. I like the story, the characters, the game and many more. I know that I can't do better review. So, I'm sorry if this is not helping.
Quite a good Novel you have written there, I might say it is very good for a starter.Keep up the good work.??????????????????????????????
Really written very well ^^ This is a good catch in this platform. I have nothing else to say except that the MC is developed real good. His background, his specialties, the challenges he faced didn't feel forced... the protagonist brother of his (despite being described as the typical edgy MC) is quiet interesting as well. If you like the Author's POV, the novel's extra, you will like this ^^
