the translation improves drastically after first couple of chapters
At first I hated it, I don’t know what the silly goose of an author was doing but after chapter 25 it does start to grow on you and the story does get better.
Author please increase the release times of the novel
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This is a really great story. Love the high school japanese setting, and the incorporation of brutal martial arts fights and a story of vengeance really elevate this to another level. Like reading an enjoyable manga in novel form. Great characters with their own unique flair, quirks and personalities. The core trio are particularly well-developed and their interactions with each other are both endearing and humorous. The comedy works well throughout to help provide relief from the brutality of the fight scenes, which in themselves are written very well and flow nicely. I have added this one to my library and I look forward to seeing the protagonist get revenge for his murdered parents. High quality entertainment. Just what a good webnovel should be.
Can someone sacrifice themselves to confirm it actually has netorare? I don't want to waste my time reading this weird sh1t if it actually has netorare. of course, I won't judge if the author has a cuck fetish, but I don't.
we need this book to be picked up, it so the perfect to read and destress ........
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it was great up until a certain chapter where there was a very explicit R-18 r*pe scene... no tags on the book about it. imo the scene wasn't written well at all and completely changes my view of the MC
.. kinda disappointing as the start was great.
It's good that there are no OP CHEATS but the mc only depends on effor and luck. Do people who die in the game die in real life like SAO or are they sent to some kind of trial ground.
I've read a couple of chapters and this story is interesting so far.
The prologue was pretty intense and I like how the author described the president. I feel like the author incorporated their personal views on politics and how the politicians can be very questionable.
For the characters, I originally thought that Hitomi was gonna be a cliched "I'm not like other girls" girl but she's not. Instead, she admires her best friend, Minako, even though she is the complete opposite of her. She mentions that people view Minako as promiscuous but Hitomi doesn't seem to think any less of her friend, which is a good thing since it shows that Hitomi is not super judgmental towards what other people do with their own bodies. I also like how the author described the Smiths. It feels like the author is taking from their own experience of what Mormon families in the US are like. I liked how the author described Hitomi's experience in the US and how the change impacted her. I thought it was very appropriate for the author to include Bible quotes at the beginning of each chapter since this is a story that involves angels.
Now for the negatives. Mainly just poor grammar. I thought it was a little weird when the author started describing the MC's posterior and chest. However, it then related to Western beauty standards and Hitomi's self image. In that case, it was kinda relevant. But then the author mentioned that people who are muscular and very sweaty are "Totally worth it", which I thought was weird.
Overall, this story is pretty interesting!
Written to a professional standard with excellent grammar and punctuation. A true masterpiece, with ingenious storyline and layout.
10/10 would recommend a read. The author is a true artist of their work.
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