Interesting plotline and a decent start but your upload schedule needs some work.
Yes, I'm giving it a five star.
why?
It's awesome.
secondly, I won't say much about the novel. I'd rather let it speak for itself.
It starts off different to other system novels in my opinion. But the fun begins straight from the start.
A villain mc is something I didn't know I had in me. But look what we got here.
Thanks for uploading!!! Always wanted to read this.
saw you were playing with the plot in the first few chapters. But I really love how the story progressed into something serious and complex. Solid world building, nice pacing and good character development.
You really have something good going on here. With some editors and a good publisher, you might get a franchise or best seller. Probably a movie.
Amazing novel! World background is amazing and the mc is amazing. Mc is very smart as to how far i've seen.
Everything is fine, the only thing that needs some improving is the writing quality, there are some minor mistakes but thats fine.
Keep up the great work, I'll give you 5 stars!
Very good read would recommend to everyone
Shameless Review.. I Welcome the Fellow Members of the Community to enjoy this light hearted novel to take a break from all the Cultivation and Martial Novels..
Pls Enjoy.
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I have not read the book completely but I am truly impressed by the dedication of this man. He is writing an eastern fantasy, which mainly contains Chinese fantasy and he is writing it in English and he is born in Nepal.
i really liked it and while it could have been better in some ways no novel is perfect and i really enjoyed reading it thank you for your hard work and i hope you make other novels that are as good as this or hopefully even better
In a nutshell its a tree being a simp and not caring about his loyal devine beasts because he is too busy being lustful and idiotic the system should just abandon him and find another host
please come back
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