This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Great story .....this is a work of art ........waiting for more updates........................ .............................................???
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
this is kind of difficult to rate. On one hand the story got a great and interesting setting, and on the other the execution feels rushed and emotionless at point.x scenes are well written, emotional interactions are not.Honestly, I am nitpicking way too much on this an will probably continue reading this some time._____SPOILER(free to read chapters)____The thing that bothers me the most is that all human women he dates, without any explanation, are fine with just being FWBs with the MC. One girl had a crush on him for years.
You thought that this will be the successor of vampire/werewolf/(and the likes) system? Well, not quite...The plot and writing is bland at best and still wondering why the mc must have to be japanese and his personality wasn't that of a striking man he is either. The constant——————is really unnecessary and the first chapter could be make up better. The author didn't do daily update like what his profile would say so I don't really likes where it was going.I won't stop you all who reading this from trying this book, it's just a matter of preference. So much for first winner of wpc.Good luck for the author tho, don't take this review to heart, try reading some great book out there, even there was plenty on this website, best of luck.
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Quite a good read so far. The story is well paced and there's a sense of adventure when you read. The world background is also intriguing and the future chapters will be something to look forward to.
There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there but for a first novel the quality is very good especially since english isn't the author native language.I really got hyped at the end of chapter 5, I know that this novel just got released but I already can't wait for the next updates lolThe story is good, the mc looks smart and from the tags I can guess that the mc will transmigrate to another world or dimension with magical stuff later in the story ?Anyway, great novel and I hope the author can keep the updates going because this novel has a great start and so much potential, it deserves to be continued.
I have read this novel on another website it is good but not addictive...............................................................................................................................
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Too fast paced …. i don’t know what chapter the raws have reached but i could see this novel quickly running out of steam and getting dropped.