I really like the MC of this series; he's actually level headed unlike other novels where the author describes the MC as a genius, level headed and such but they're just really lucky they didn't get murdered If you like a badass MC with supporting characters with actual substance then this series is for you
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Is a very good novel if you like sci fi, plot armor for everything, the fu**ing trash of the chinese nationalism, the whole story is fu**ing hurried making things badly presented and poorly explained, and wasting incredible chances to make a great story.
"With no attachment left, without relieving, can also reach reincarnation."
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I am at chapter 39, and so far, I like the concept but do wish the writing was more fluent. it has the feel of direct translation with no polish. so. writer do not give up on this. I look forward to read more.
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Pros: I think your storytelling is great. The way you let the facts sink in is also great. But for a Naruto fan, some parts of the explanation may feel boring. Having watched Naruto myself years ago, I think the way you have darkened the universe is something many old Naruto fans would want.Cons: First of all, even if you mentioned somewhere in the synopsis or the review that it isn't a fanfic, it gives a fanfic vive. I don't know about the future chapters but for now, the pacing of the story is quite slow. I know that the words for the details to sink and to give info just in case someone with zero knowledge of Naruto reads it; it is also important to minimise those words to a bare minimum so that it feels like the story is progressing quickly. If you planned the slow pacing, I can't say much about it.
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I loved Amelia and Matteo were able to be happy. I was equally happy and excited with the direction you carried the storyline of Catherine, Ben and Aiden and Charles. Emmille storyline was shocking. The book was enjoyable and entertaining.
Nice work ?? I m waiting for the next chapters