Hey author! Just caught up on all the chapters here so far. I don’t think I’ve seen a red dot by the book title of the app indicating a chapter update in a while. I get that you have other books so I won’t pressure you on it. But will this be continuing?
Ako 'to si Tenk, I've read the your story na. The plot is normal and you could see right through it and you will already know what will happen to them. The MC is not likable but I think there will be a character development that will soon arise. But maybe the ideas of mine that pop into my brain might be wrong but despite the fact it is still well written and worth to read. There is still more rooms for improvement but don't be discourage, you did great and I might as well finish your story.
This story has potential and the author too. Keep writing!
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I have not read this yet
But from the name and synopsis i am reluctant to do so.
But butt buttttttt... I have a good recommendation for a guys who are willing to waste few brain cells. Check this one out, preferably you should use google translate instead of mtl, check this novel out, it is fun read with good concept, with good system.
If you read until here,
不会真有人觉得师尊是凡人吧
Give it a go, you won't regret it. If you do tell me why. I have few more if you like this one.
OH I absolutely love the plot and the synopsis is good too . It would be great if the story had constant updates !!!!
But , anyway All the best !!!
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First thing, I love to applaud you with the concept. For me, it's new, unusual and I never heard of it before. The thing about sci-fictions today are the ideas seemed identical so reading your novel was refreshing to me. Another is I love how you already put distinctive traits for each character you presented which makes us readers easier to differentiate with them and note them individually. And what I like the most is how you lay the events perfectly that lead to string age. It helped put depth, add mystery and stir my curiosity. What I'd kindly suggest is apply flashback rather than descriptive explanation of the past(though, it's up to you especially if that's just your style) because I personally think it has more feels. Nonetheless, I had no problem with grammar or mechanics because I honestly didn't see errors on those. Ultimately, kudos! I really admire sci-fi writers because I believe they had the hardest time. Anyway, keep the fire in you burning!
Refreshing and very emotionally charged. I am looking forward to see how he wakes up and gains control of the world!! Additionally I love how Aleyria is so filial to her dad. Plus she is so powerful!!
The concept seems intresting and we are given the power structure right from the start, making it easy to understand. The language is simple so one won't get lost easily and need to look up a dictionary either.Over all a good read to add to your daily routine.
Every chapter was action-packed with great characters to root for and antagonists you would want to scream "death". Well written with great world background and story plot. Every climatic twist would make you binge-read this novel and I highly recommend you do. Looking forward to reading more chapters
I'm not so sure what to say about this book since it's just about 5 or 6 chapters in. but the world building alone is mind blowing, way beyond my expectations for the early stages and a twist to some of the cliche tropes on Webnovel. however I worry the author is taking on too much and won't be able to balance it well, but for now. the story is well written and seems full of potential, I'm looking forward to seeing how beasts and cards mesh well.
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