hmmmmmmh i like the start and hope u don't drop this althought u started it just for the competetion . Ahem lemme give you a tip *Cough* do a massive release *Cough* to get poppular *Cough* it will help you early *Cough* *Cough* i am not beaing selfish not at all *Cough* x) . Jokes aside well done and continue pls :p
Im Loving It
Love it +!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I came here because of the nice pic, but I stayed because of the interesting story. The story is simply at the start chapter 3, but it has intrigued me. It was actually able to pull me away from continuing writing my own novels.
P.S don't tell my readers I was here. Just taking a breather with this nice story. :)
I hope you will new upload fast... The story are okay but to many flashbacks it is annoying sometimes but i hope you can keep the good works
IT was kinda good until chapter 60 and up the mc actually acts like 10 year old he has no goal or any type of intellect or experience of a 30 year old when he attends the dukes party its so much going on in the background i dont even know whats happening theirs like 5 different groups with different goals and agendas the mc is just getting pushed around with nothing on his mind but woman that's the only thing he does to get back at them not oh so you forced me into a dinner im gonna get your wife someday oh you punched me well im gonna take your wife we find out he has a lot of talent and magic but he hasn't trained since then he only did it for a mission once and that's it it's so much happening and his face and its like he's ignoring it i see where the plot can go and it has potential but the mc is just too stupid and immature
I have read up to chapter 89 and the book has been enjoyable so far. My only issue is the main characters personality which sometimes breaks the immersion for me. As a grand sage in his previous life, I had some expectation that his personality would not be so childish. I can understand his overtly excited and emotional behaviour when it comes to magic, as that is the one things he loves the most, but whenever I read this novel it feels like the Mc should be a normal boy from earth who reincarnated into a magical world with modern science knowledge. Aside from when the author reminds us of his previous life as a old grand sage I always see the Mc as a normal kid. His interactions with other people whether they be adults or kids his age have no semblance of a reincarnated sage. And whenever the contrast does appear it breaks my immersion which is a bit annoying. In my opinion this novel would be much better if the Mc was either a normal child with some lucky encounters or a magic loving human from earth.
If you can look past that issue then this novel is well written and fun to read.
very goog story and very good character .
From what I have read, this novel is unique, this novel has some dark things in it and reading that is not easy for the heart I am only reading this, so I can see Mc become a good person and save the heroinesBut if that didn't occur then I am dropping this
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This is truly a masterpiece. The worldbuilding is absolutely great. The main character is unlike the other cliche characters, who are always indecisive and need some kind of tragic event to start cultivating. He does what he wishes to while still maintaining his moral values
The story has a very steady development. Neither too slow nor too fast. While the writing quality needs a bit of work, I truly think this is a story worth one's time to read.
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