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Ok I’ve got to admit that I’m a fan!!! I’ve tried reading a few gaming novels on WN, but yours is the first one I could seriously read. Your writing style is wonderful, and there weren’t any errors that I could pick up on. The dialogue also felt natural, and with the way you crafted Hao, it’s easy to see who he is and understand where he’s coming from. Great work!!!
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This story is so touching the relationship between the father and son is so sweet I love this please update soon I want to know what happens next
Although it's my first time reading a book in this genre, I must say you portrayed all descriptions accurately. The world background, the game description and inside the game everything seems real. Nice work author. Keep up the good work.
This book is a mix of slice if life and fantasy which make it great as those are two good genre's mixed together and the author managed to bring out the best of both. At the moment I am writing this the book has 30 chapter and thy are all great, there have hardly been any big mistakes I have noticed and the author keeps a good update schedule. The author also reacts to our comments so you can tell he puts a lot into this story. The only reason I could give this book a perfect rating is because it's only in my 3rd of my top 5 books I always read.
The is basically a kid friendly kingdom building novel with no political intrigue or conflict. All the changes he does have no repercussions, conflict, and passes too easily.He introduces modern weaponry without any safeguard to espionage (he increases the budget for internal security and that’s all he did) but nothing gets leaked or stolen. It would had been better to introduce conflict when designs get stolen.He signs modern reform bills left and right like free education and agriculture reforms like he has infinite money and no concerns. There should had been more though put into this or rolled out progressively instead of all at once.There is no political backlash from the conservative faction (if they exist at all) from all the modern reforms rapidly being introduced. The romance feels like a middle school kiss and get pregnant love and very forced and rushed. The new queen is an innocent trophy wife with no character and introduces no drama or plot additions. He also allows her to choose if she wants to reject a political marriage between monarchs and the most advanced nation like it’s a middle school girlfriend breakup. It would had been better if she was a princess of an enemy nation or eastern countries so you have a vehicle to naturally move the plot to other countries with some drama and conflict. Also the pacing between the introduction of the terrorist attacks with the next reattempt is too long and readers don’t care about the terrorist group that killed the parents anymore.Add some conflict and don’t play it too safe.
just garbage, excluding the fact the novel goes premium at 20 chaps the english of the author is horrendous. the plot doesn't make sense and the novel doesn't spark any kind of excitement! you had plenty of time to make this good but you didn't, sorry if English isn't your first language.
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Nice story, been looking this kind of novel for long, finally found it. An immortal story in modern age. Waiting for the next chapter.
keep it up man...
Seems promising at first, but after reading a few chapter I feel like wasting my time... so bland, no flavors.. and tasteless.
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