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Not to be a wet blanket or anything….but wasn’t this novel plus the prequel fully translated by someone already?
to give a more constructive answer to you, harems are sh*t, and romance is almost always never done well in light novels, only western novels have a consistent formula for decent romance
Hehe boi
New chapters?
Yes. Some of the girl he like and bedded got raped or go look for other men.
I remember this being quite good
Ohh sheet... Seems someone got push to dire straits... I'll skip to the ending this instance.. I'm currently at 200+ chapter.
I don't know if this story copied citadel of angels or it copied this one but there are one hella lot of similarities. Plus there's way too many repetitions, too many gender mix up in editing and it's like the author couldn't even think up names for some of the characters so he just decided to identify them by their descriptions over and over again
what happendd to his other wives? so sad ending in his love life
What is IRAS?
From how unique the story is to how smooth it flows to how its written like someone who speaks actual english
Author, I loved your story, it's obvious that there is potential, lots of potential, seeping from your novel. The only thing lacking is um, how do I say this? Ah yes, a narrative technique. It's evident from the synopsis that you lack a narrative technique. Please don't treat this as criticism, merely feedback to make your story even better! I love the concept, the worldbuilding, but the story could use some descriptions. For a beginning author, your writing is quite good, and I believe you should keep writing because practice makes perfect :) Good luck and kudos to you!
