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It's almost perfect cultivation novel. Really. You can't find anything better. MC is intelligent, strong but not OP. Pacing is good. The only bad thing is that every time i read it i feel like some drug addict, wanting more and more.
Writing is very good and I really like the idea behind the novel. But the length of chapters is very short however they are getting better..
A very unique idea, which I love. It fills your head with wonders and possibilities. Sometimes, not all good novels must have a storyline or characters. Stories that are mind provoking are extremely interactive since they make the reader feel included. Will be looking forward for more.
There are a lot of fake reviews on this novel beware.
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There’s already grammar mistakes in the synopsis so I’m wondering how bad the translations are gonna be. Hopefully it’s not as bad as it seems.
A great novel with good focus on the MC and good character building. Great paced with very little filler, although the're a few chapter released, the world building is amazing. it's one of the better cultivation stories I've read.
Disclaimer: review up to chapter 168.First for those impatient: Is it worth reading? Fuck yes. Now onto the review. This as far as I can understand from the text is a MTL of a chinese pokemon fanfic. The mc is a reincarnator from Earth who got reborn back in time after dying shortly after he reached e4 level. So, in essence it's his 3rd try at life. While this is explained in early chapters the TL is pretty hard to understand. Mc also has a cheat - the AI chip like one Leylin from Warlock of the Magus World has. The fic is a "realistic pokemon world" Type, and it really gets it with all the politics, brutality of the underworld and nepotism. The MC is a villain so if you hate that you probably won't like the fic. Now onto the pros:The mc is a Rocket. Not the Jessie James kind, more Hunter J kind. The MC is smart. He likes to plan ahead. The author managed to combine and adapt the vrmmorpg item rarity system and nutrition into a believable IRL equivalent of IV/EVs from the games in aptitudes and pokeblocks. Coherent and consistent worldbuilding. The explanation why Team Rocket mainly uses dark types, and their standard sets of mons just makes sense. MC's team isn't the standard cliché of 5 pseudo-legendaries and a Mega like in most fics. 168 chapters in we're almost 2/3rd into 1st arc. This seems like a good 3-5k chapter behemoth. Now onto the cons:It's MTL. Pokemon names, attacks and character names don't translate half of the time. For pokemon species there are edits like ghost=gastly, but for characters I'm still wondering who Nazi is. The MC is arrogant when he really has no right to. Deus ex AI chipThe whole Rocket contribution points and **** reeks of cultivation novels. This is most likely a 3-5 k chapter behemothOverall I'd rate it within top 5 "realistic pokemon world" Novels including ffn ones. I love it and recommend you to at least try reading it.
Beacuse i like what i read and it seems like it would be a potential good read i rated 5 stars for potential. pls dont drop and contiue, i look forward to what happens next!!.............................
This is an updated review after reading 60 chapters,Previously i felt the MC stupid for focusing on subclass as i believed it was a bad investment,But thankfully the mc did change and has now focused more on becoming stronger(not as much as i want but good enough for now),Considering the mc situation ill say his choices weren’t too bad(can’t expect him to be smart from the get go i suppose),Although i still don’t like trickster/disguiser path as i dont like cheap tricks and prefer frontal battle where you simply crush and dominate your enemies,But thats just an opinion and i like that the mc started to slowly focus on his main occupation (although ill still say he could be much stronger if he learns how to grind exp)anyway the story is going in a good direction at the moment, hopefully the mc keeps on his path and doesn’t become a goody two shoes self sacrificing selfless hero as i already have a phobia from these types of dense stupid MC’s( so far the NC has shown no signs whatsover that he will follow that crazy path thankfully)Anyway good luck author I’ll Follow this story(occasionally ill give comments, i only give comments when im annoyed by the mc or a lead character, i cant help myself sometimes to rant whenever the mc makes a choice contrary to what i believe is a better choice and so it’s probably often,,,)Anyway thanks for reading my lenthy unobstructive review.Sorry for writing a review that is more of an opinion than a proper review.
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