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Mythology + awesome writing style = an awesome novel. I really enjoyed reading it and got too excited so I'm leaving a review to tell everyone to try this novel out.
50 chapters in and this novel reads like it was written in a different language and then machine translated into english with some editing.
This shows in specific areas like where the author says something to the effect of “I did no felony to you” to which the other person responds with something like “You did do a felony to me.” There are plenty more examples like the MC being called a “Lamp” abruptly in the first few chapters with little explanation of what that is. I suspect the author meant “guide” or “scout.”
Story is quite unclear (in an unintentional way) with the author trying to introduce new elements (characters, details, thoughts) without explaining them (just throwing them in there).
Dropped with no regrets, the positive reviews seem suspicious as this novel is nowhere near 4+ stars. Maybe a 3 at most.
UNIQUE!!
The writer's creative and imaginative skills are at par. Indulging fantasy and sci-fi is an unique concept. But the chapters could be made longer and there were few grammatical errors, which weren't that problematic.
Overall, it's an interesting plot.
Keep going!!!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I'm so in love with the author and her writing style. ive been hooked from the first page and i haven't been able to put the book down ever since
A decent story however it feels like the author decided to stop writing it part of the way through. the ending doesnt really feel like an ending, It feels like It was the author giving up on writing any more of the story.
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Great novel with a MC who actually uses his brain a phenomenon rarely seen in CN, the translation quality is pretty good imo and they'll get better as the time goes on.PS- Chapters before 104 can be found on Novel Updates
Although I have not read it yet but already this book is giving me amazing potential vibes I hope this can get at least 100 chapters author I’m looking forward to it!
This book is AMAZING. The writing is incredible, vivid and full of feelings. The plot is really intriguing and enigmatic, which is good for providing thrills. The characters and their notions are understandable. Overall, wonderful work!Summed up in one word: WELL-THOUGHT ?