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when I found out author was writing an original, it got me hella excited I mean I love the DC and Marvel fanfics I mean they're probably my favourite DC and Marvel fanfics and so far it seems that this is going to be even better
For totally totally *pure* reasons I give this five stars.
I really like this book and hope it gets picked but sadly it's got some long winded parts that may any some people great book other then that I wonder what minding Atlantis McNeill write about
The plot armor is too thick. Boring. .
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More garbage sign in novels with no real story or worldbuilding.
i haven't read the book yet but ill give it 5 star hoping it will be good as armipotent also looking forward later ill change my review if good or not.
is this droped if it is i would like to know coz i realy love this novel?
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Already more than 500 chapters I have two questions please your novel is close to the end or not yet? And do you plan to use the function on wn that allows you to make a novel free for 24 hours? maybe one day ? It will attract more people since we see it on the home page and it will allow other readers to continue
Ichibi, Nibi, bokuwa Tobi!
Everything in this novel is great, stories great, characters are great(specially the MC, not one dimensional like the rest of the original authors in this website who copies Chinese authors characters, which just ends up a poor imitation of them, which is quite honestly embarrassing). The chapters are long which is great.
The chapters format is great (very convenient to read on phone). The world could be fleshed out more though but that can be fixed in later chapters.
The only problem with this novel, is the update for chapters but I guess it’ the price for quality.
PS Authors who are reading this, learn from this author on how to make an OP character in his story, be interesting and great to read.
One of diamonds among the trash in this app.
