It's a good novel for power scalers, not bad overall. I loved that the mc erased the usual boring novel tropes such as "face slapping, plot armor" etc.. I truly love what you did with the novel. Aside the really excruciatingly painful slow chap tee updates, It has been an interesting experience. I realize it is still ongoing, How many more chapters are we to expect?Could you expand or shed more light on the basis of the universe or multiverse and/or its dimensions. For example, is the universe three, four, five or infinite dimensional(hilbert space)? Is it a type 2, 3 or 4 multiverse etc.I love the subtle integration of mathematical concepts such as higher infinities(Which shows the author isn't imagination-impaired) and Patrick transcending it and ascribing the concept of absolute infinity to Patrick.. But I felt you could've taken it further, it felt vague, open to numerous interpretations and cannot be likened to the actual georg cantor's "absolute infinity" without further exposition and basis. If your goal is to create a really op character, you should work on these.. And more importantly, expand on the basis of the universe and multiverse. You can always expand your research on set theories, although, you seem to get the gist of it.You went on about "omnivastance" but you never truly explained what it meant in the grand scheme of things.. Is it likened to the Hindu concept of "omnivastance"? I loved raliegh and want to see more of the character, bring more exposure to the side characters, So, as not to make the story stale.In the beginning you mentioned luo zheng (from apotheosis) and nie li. hinting a future encounter between these characters and Patrick. Do you still have plans for this?I'd also suggest you give Patrick a true challenge...His battles are predictable. I've been following this novel for a year now and I hope you won't let us (Your loyal readers) down.
The grammar and punctuation could use more work. I could feel the pain of Daniel. The gods in all worlds are like that; cold, observing and uncaring.
comeeee backkkkkkkkk, for basketball novels there aint much better than this smh. Well others are like KnB, this one though seems fairly reasonable. Like it's still somewhat realistic compared to others where you cant miss shots or something
good novel .but Infinite Battlefield: Ten Times the Points it's better.
The writing is quality is superb, the world building is also well written, power system is easy to understand, but the character is just so lame, starting to his decision making and his shounen attitude, he is always being spoon feed. he is an adult in his past life yet his thinking is similar to a child. i cannot continue reading
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I should say I stopped reading around chapter 100. The idea is really cool and I loved the first 50-60 chapters but it fell of from there. Similar to many other books with a non humanoid MC it dosent stay that way for long. He gets a human body and all of a sudden its like every other cultivation book on this app. It feels like he is limiting himself greatly because he wants to be a human and have a human body. He could "sleep" anywhere he wants for a few hundred years and have enough energy to buy whatever he wants but he wants to cultivate slowly for some reason and then is mad/upset when he isnt stronger.
thank you jesaira so much.. halos basahin mo lahat ng novel ko kahit di kasing ganda ng iba.
Really interesting keep it up
It's very interesting.
love this book, it is detailed and extremely well written. the whole series is amazing and seems to take actual knowledge and research to write! absolutely recommend this book and the rest of the series as well!