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Nice novel with a very good plot. With many twists and turns along the way. A classic story where with great power comes great responsibility.
The quality of writing is good and neat, but I think it's a bit mediocre. With the addition of more variety of vocabularies, this will be perfect. I love the theme that is unique and different from the usual online novels, so it makes this novel is exciting to read. I'm honestly surprised that it's about alien, thought it will be an usual fantasy genre with magical creatures or something. I gave 4 stars only for world background, because I like more detailed narration on setting. Overall, I love the story, I need to adapt a bit with dirty jokes, but I can handle it. lol!
Keep up the good work, Gaasuja! Always love your work!
Literally amazing. Actually realistic and intelligent- The main character uses his system to gauge the world, understand difficulty and make deductions.
If this doesn't get picked, I'll revolt.
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I remember reading this story somewhere else (probably fanfiction . com).
Is it your own work and you are relocating it here or is it someone else's?
If it is someone else's, I hope you have their permission to post it here.
Utter generic garbage.
Don't waste your time, read something else.
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I love it just not enough chapters
Nice.
YEESSSSSSS!
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This novel really took me by surprise and I want more people to try it, if you read the first 10 chapters and still aren't interested on this novel, then maybe it's not for you. This story is takes a very unique approach to the concepts of wizards and I sincerely hope it gets more recognition