Story seems promising I guess, but there are so many mistakes with the writing it’s literally unreadable. I find it impossible to immerse myself in the story when I’m constantly trying to piece together sentences
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Hands down one of the best World Building I've ever seen. The plot is amazing, and you are making me want to improve overall as a writer. Hope you continue because I added this to my library so I am looking forward to it!
God did destroy the world tho (flood remember). So he is even more powerful. you may be able to erase it, but he can create it and destroy it. and that is far more terrifying. Interesting synopsis tho. Let's see if it is good.
this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far.
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I m Angry....
6 Chaps & Then Premium...
What A Greedy Author.
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Sect building - check
MC dimensional place like he can bring people inside -check
Loving and loyal ally - check
Clever MC -check
Transmigration- check
Medical knowledge of MC - check
Formation and inscriber MC - check
MC meticulous planner - check
Unique profound vein and arts - check
Mysterious Background -check
World background and development - c heck
MC development check
MC sometimes perveted mind --heck
Your addicion reading this novel - check
Another bait dog novel. The whole thing about him being a villain is FALSE, he is literally a normal MC and the protags are actually young master brain damaged type 3rd rate villains who spew 10 IQ comments and actions. How anyone thought this was a good novel is beyond me. The world structure and the other characters make 0 sense, a literal mortal who can hold more money than the cultivatuon country, thats like a 5 IQ idea that wouldnt work at all, and a big guild master has like 0 bodyguards for his weak daughter in her birthday party and she gets kidnapped with 0 difficulty even a retard hobo can do it
what's the title of the mtl? I couldn't find it. please help
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Starts out with the same trashy trope. I dont need to help others or ill do whats good for me. next chapter he saves a girl and gives her a bottle of mineral water. Which like 6 sentences ago was sgown to be super hard to come by and is what set some bad guys to stop raping the girl and take his water.
Average novel so far 25chaps in
Oh god, It's boring. I actually kinda liked the idea of a grass mc who needs to cultivate to get stronger but this execution is just awful. the grammar isn't bad but I had to start skimming just a few chapters in cause it was so boring.