SpiritImmortal
i like how the story is evolving cant wait for more chapter?
I really enjoyed this storyit's felt like I was there what happened to the girl whom was been beating? ? ?
there is nothing interesting about this novel.
everything has been done before.
at first it was funny to read his antics but those got old really quick and then the frustration of the mc never taking anything serious kicks in.
Just started this novel, it has some interesting plot. But unfortunately the writing quality is shit. The Author/translator + editor do not know basic English. Past and present tense is mixed up everywhere. For some reason the word 'a' Is missed out everywhere aswell. Pisses me off.
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Very Wholesome.
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FucK this was not chosen. Why?why?why? How do the editors even choose these novels. By lottery? Luck? Or blindly[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Before i say anything else, this five star review isnt shameless, it is well deserved, i have read many cultivation novels and have also wrote many on webnovel, one of my best was the divine ascension system! [img=faceslap][img=coins][img=fp][img=recommend]
So I've read up to chapter 21, and I can say that the story is good so far. The author is trying to present a unique system of cultivation and there's quite a bit of world-building in these few chapters.
Keep up the good work author, I have lots of hope regarding this. [img=recommend]
this reminds me of hunger games. this must be good in manhua. the flow of the story was well written and well said. although i just read the two chaps it was really interesting. if I'm not that busy i will read this.. loking forward to this
Really really good story!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work. One of the best noveLs i read so far, i enjoy reading this novel it has great potential.
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