Every chapter a deception. Although I'm on chapter 20, I hope it improves fast, if not, I'm dropping it.....................................
Shameless author review here. Yep, it's a thing. I am my own harshest critic, but I believe this story to be brilliant. And trust me, I'm not the only one. I have recently been to the future with a time travelling device and I have brought back some of the feedback my hit novel received from some of the world's most respected reviewers:***That Random Blind Guy Who Lives in a Train Station Bathroom called it "The single greatest work of fiction he has ever seen!" and he fixed his blind eyes just so that he could "read the damn thing!"***The New York Times fired their entire roster of journalists and started printing fiction just so that they could "Print Easy Tiger's masterpiece".***Roger Ebert's clone called it an "action-packed spectacle that will have action-junkies the world over squealing in giddy delight!"***The Pope references it in the new bible because it was "just that damn good!"***Hollywood are fighting over the rights to a screenplay because it is a "action-packed thrill-ride in a fictional world filled with unlimited potential."***President Trump Jr has made the work compulsory reading for all High school students as he considered it a "masterpiece of action literature unseen since Shakespeare".***The novel also saved the global economy from Covid-19 as "90% of the world's population have rushed out to buy themselves a physical copy".So there you have it. Your enjoyment of this work is guaranteed. So go ahead and give it a go!If you don't trust me, trust in the future.
Now, the story reach 517 chapters now.Spoiler:Noriko Null becomes new leader of entire Olympus Galaxy. That all I can said. In a literal sense, she is sole ruler now.
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock!I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged). Cheers!
High class novel with mystery, dread, action, scheming, adventure, criminals, alien invasion, and criminal organization. Each enemy is greater than the one before.Give you five stars for perfect everything.Please update & don't drop!Please!!!
paragraphs needs to be spaced out, naming sence is horrible. should have stuck with original names and simplified things more. overall this is a good story but it's hard to follow in the beginning.
All right this novel great writing quality. You have good updates everyday and good world background that with some mystery insides. It has good romance, story. Butbutbutbuuuuttttt.... It has worse power level development. Power level barrier. And whacky power level of MC soooooo whacky and absurd that make it nonsense and i think i will drop this novel... Seriously how can such absurd mc still alive after all that thing happen. This novel has no sense power level on mc believe me if you want good story you can pick this. but if you do just dont think of the mc strength because this ****ty brat mc it has no sense of power level and he is so weak and pathetic to the point it absurd.
Review Change: this webnovel 100% has the capability to stand side by side with the other top webnovels (for example, My Vampire System). the novel has a few grammer mistakes but that doesnt affect the meaning behind the paragraph the author is trying to express. Overall this webnovel is already in my top 10 favorites and i greatly urge new readers to give the webnovel 10 chapters before writing it off and you’ll be hooked. In all honestly, the biggest write off for most is the amount of chapters a webnovel has but if you give this one a chance, you wont regret it. Once the webnovel has a little over 200 chapters, I bet it’ll be a top webnovel as it rightfully deserves. That’s all from me. ?
It's like the author had multiple story ideas and put them into a mishmash of one.He has two simultaneous storylines going on, for the ml and fl.But it was soooooooooooooo arbitrary. Like the story style changes completely from the first dozen chapter.The author tells the reader to read every other chapter if we prefer one protag over the other.But then why even write the story that way?I can't go on reading a story knowing I am probably going to miss half of it. I read till chapter 66, so I know if you read only every other chapter, you would miss a BUNCH of infodumps and worldbuildings. So what's even the point of saying " If you prefer to only read one or the other lead, just read every other chapter of your preference." if the reader is missing a lot of the technical details.And it's honestly hard to get immersed in a story where each next chapter is about another protagonist.So rather than multiple good stories, we have a mediocre one.Not worth the time. I gave story dev a 1 star.The author also used 2 different time units, for usual things he uses day, minute, second, week, year etcetc but then he inserts ancient chinese time units like shi, shun, ke. Its very confusing.The writing does improve though. but it's still very confusing.
Worst system ever. Guy has to sign in or else he gets punished and suffers a penalty but all his rewards get announced thus the good ones get snatched. I know its supposed to provide some comedy but it will only frustate you
The story had a good premise but the author drags out a single fight scene over about 10 chapters and then it's going on about the reactions of people to the fight in another 10 chapters. The story isn't progressing at all and its literally the same plot point said over and over from different points of view broken down but in a totally useless way.
I'm not impressed. TL quality is at "edited MTL" Level with constant 'Gems' like "blood level" Instead of HP. Story (or the 3/4 that I managed to understand) seems pretty nice so far, but IMO still middle of the pack in "video game" Genre. Get a decent editor to fix the "blood level" Mess and it would be decent 3.8 IMO.