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A fun read with a simple direct writing style. No repeated descriptions nor any info dumps, and not even weird flowery words. A delightful light read. --------The main problems: - Ghost novel, but author uses all his power to make the ghost irrelevant.[MC is a ghost, and is innately Spirit & Intelligence dependant in terms of stats, he also mainly has skills that use mana.Realistically, he should focus on building on his strengths and increase his ghost power and ghostly skills. However, Author rarely has him in ghost form, never focuses on building ghost power nor skills.MC raises stats equally.MC even now has a solid ghost body where he eats and drinks.What's the point of being a ghost? Now he's basically just a human with extra steps.];;;;;;;;- A very obnoxiously dumb naive MC. [MC is a 28YO Lawyer. Yet his decisions here are atrocious, he's not cautious and always shows off his skills attracting trouble, he doesn't think of his future nor how his actions or lack of actions mights affect him, his thought process is very childish and naive, he's careless, he acts like an inexperienced 10YO, he's so obvious in his lies, he's pathetic, his decisions and choices are not properly thought through and most of them are nonsense and bullshit] -----------Honestly, I'm mainly dropping this story because of the second point. I don't mind the that the ghost part is irrelevant now, since the story is a light fun read. But the MC being like this is just insulting to readers.
I like how he started explaining the book and he did it in a brief way. The chapters end in ways that make you want to read the next chapter. This book has a bright future.
"Or ... The assistant will have fun with you Doc--"
All of class was silenced for a moment.
"I've changed a lot since I found you. A playboy bachelor found his karma." - Felix
"Raito!"
"Cantik. Sangat cantik." gumam Zei sambil mengembangkan senyumnya dan mengusap pelan rambut Nain. Nain tersenyum mendengar pujian dari Zei, tapi lagi-lagi Nain menahan emosinya untuk mengatakan jika Zei sangat tampan dengan setelan jas hitamnya.
So much to do, so much to see
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
You'll never know if you don't go