Delicate Concubine Bian

let's see- 2 orphans supporting each other, young masters who can pay their way into school instead of weeding out weak talents, a fake transmigrator whose transmigration will be brought up once and never again just so that the author can have an excuse to add the transmigration tag and give the MC a system instead of just giving it to someone from that world, an author who has no idea the power equipment can have on a fight and label axillary professions as low class, no reason for the system existing. I think we have a copy paste piece of chines propaganda that will turn racist less then 50 chapters in.

Story is really good but there are occasional crammar and spelling mistakes. Character degelopment is decent but mc’s emotions are just all over the place and don’t machup with regular behavior and also the context of the situation. Overall a really good story MC needs some work

Like many of you, I am also just a fan and an avid reader of light novels who have gone through a lot of imagination everytime I read through the chapters of a story.. so I am not actually a professional writer..This novel is actually my first.. I don’t know, it’s just that one day I started to conceptualize my own idea of cultivation world.. and then inspiration suddenly kicked in to write it down in the midst of my own personal schedule.. and I say my work was way way far from perfect but it was fun doing it..I then took all the courage I could muster just to upload the first few chapters I made about three months ago because I wanted to share what I started to write.. I do feel a bit sad that there are holes in the story that I failed to see which somehow disappointed some of the readers but I don’t feel discouraged at all.. in fact I feel that those things push me to improve this work..So I’m kind of happy how many of the readers reacted to the story especially when some of you even discussed things in the comment section..So thank you, hope you continue reading..Qairi

When I first started this novel I was like what is this, I even added it to my library without reading it, but when I couldn't get any update from nirvana I started this and am really enjoying this

Quality. Lots of promise, invested in the story and the characters. Looking forward to see where it goes. MC has a good personality, definitely a scoundrel. Good casual read!

Very nice idea in general; the pace may be quiet slow for some people, but it is therefore more realistic. It really differs from other XianXia stories (in a positive way, if you ask me), since it does not have some overpowered kid as MC and you are not thrown into some miserable romance story after the first chapters.