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bro , are you going to upload normal chapter or all your remaining chapters are going to be privileged.
The story's good but a book cover would be nice. Plus, based on one of the chapters, the Marques guy likes her right? So if they were to be a couple later, why isn't it mentioned there? Or perhaps will we have a new male lead as well?
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Best webnovel I read in a while !
Technically good potential for a guilty pleasure story, but blatant racism against black people (see: Molson and comments comparing him vs the woman he hired instead) and all round xenophobia against non Chinese (see: Go back to England chapter followed by beauty of the native Chinese woman)
I like the way you wrote it, it's very clear and easy to understand. after all this novel is promising story. I love the characters and looking forward to them. keep it up!
Reading the name I thought it'd be all about the protag but I'm loving how each chapter is unfolding with a lucid description of each character. The realisticity is awfully intriguing. And our author is very much into super long sentences I see ?
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It's such a great novel! The story is just unpredictable! You just can't guess what will happen next. Enjoyed reading it so much and it just goes to how underrated this is.
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I give this the big good award. Writing quality - havent found any grammar mistakes so 5/5 thereStory development - i like how the pacing has been til chap 15, not to fast and not too slow. just hope he doesnt skip his childhood years like so many others do. Character design - they're good... it seems like. tho that might change once there are more characters introducedWorld Background - sort of uniqe? idk it seems familiar but also not, but i dont have anything bad to say about it so its atleast good enoughlooking forwards to read this book. The only thing i might not like about it is that the system is not universal for everyone, then it feels like way to much of a cheat in my opinion. however i wont drop a good book because of something like that. Gl with your writing author :D
It's been a while(2 years and a few months) since you've updated any of your stories, so I decided to try updating my review in an attempt to ask you a question, sir author are you planning to ever continue your stories or are you not planning to write anymore because of personal reasons, webnovel's infamous pyramid scheme like writer's contracts and/or some of the more toxic comments I've seen posted on your most recent chapters? Because honestly, while I wouldn't blame you for not continuing your stories due to some of the things I mentioned above, I know that I personally would love to see you continue or even potentially do a rewrite of your current incomplete works. Also, I hope that whatever you may have going on, you're doing well the last few years have been hard on everyone worldwide, both personally and economically.
