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i am giving it a 5 not because it's great, but because the reviews are overly harsh. As far as the "I'm Actually a Cultivaiton Bigshot" copies go, this is my favorite one, and I've read (and dropped) 4 others.
So this is my review about this novel, well my first time reviewing about something really. First i read until chapter 19 and i'm not going to talk about this novel writing quality since English itself wasn't my first language. Now let's talk about it shall we first of the MC. I kinda have a weird feeling about the MC, if i have to say it "it work but doesn't make sense" first of all the MC is a dropout and a failure, in chapter 9 in the comment box the author describe the MC as a depressed and suicidal shut-in. but the way i see it the MC is not a depressed dude nor he is a shut-in if he is a depressed dude and a shut in he's definitely won't be able to talk to the police officer, hell the moment he sees the officer the dude will definitely either have an uncontrollable breathing or running somewhere and definitely he won't be able to think clearly and will definitely have a panic attack or something and he's probably going to have a hard time communicating with his roommate. And i can say this, because as an experience depressed man if i'am in a situation where something unexpected happened i'll definitely have a panic attack especially if the first thing i heard someone called me pervert and there's a police officer running to me. truth to be told The way i saw him personally he's not a depressed men he's more of a drug addict. Reason i used to have a friend that do drug, and the MC reminded me of him, that dude lack any personal reason, or ambition always follow the wave the only personal distinction that differ from other is that he's more prone to violence and lust, so i can see it in MC, it's more similar to him than a depressed dude or a shut-in one. That's why in my mind i deleted anything about the MC desc and i created my own backstory version of MC where he's a drug addict because he's a drug addict his college life ruin his parent abandoned him he lost everything the MC then become a dealer go to jail then get released after that he's find that life as an ex-criminal is really hard he wasn't able to get a job and he realized he's getting old and then he felt suicidal and try to kill himself only to be transported in another world. Well that or someone or something crammed someone else memory into the MC that's why the MC doesn't have any distinct personality since the MC itself is a being that came from nothing in the first place. sorry author only after i created that in my head can i move-on with your story, because i felt there's something wrong with the MC flexible personality. Okay next the other character the female police i enjoy both of them Sarah and Yumi Sarah have a rebel personality while Yumi kind of big sister type i don't want to go into detailed but the two of them have a more distinct personality than the MC. Now the boss or Claudette not much known since her introduction with MC kinda brief but i suspect the author gonna make her into one of those old lady that tough but her brain fill with desired to get married but that's my theory. Now onto the roommate, i'm sorry author but i'am gonna say this the roommate for me their whole existence is to glorified the MC, yap a fitting side character to glorified the MC i mean sure there's no plot hole because the author make the MC have Level 100 Charm/charisma but i mean it's their first time meeting you know, i mean the MC is a new student he's also a beginner in VR game, instead of the Roommate bow to anything the MC said shouldn't they have a feeling of trying to impress the MC instead since you know High school pride?? (i meant that since the roommate had been in the school longer than the MC). and it's more make sense since in the beginning the MC hasn't showed any leader like ability. but then again this is my personal taste i like the other character but yeah not the roommate. but for reader out there that read this don't worry. The author try to flesh out more of the character, i see some growth and change here and there and i expected in the future more character will be fleshed out. but then again, i'm also worried since there's so many new character, i don't even remember half of them. I really hope the author focused more on fleshing out more character instead of introducing more. Sometimes Small cast are better than a lot of cast i mean try reading release the witch without character wiki page.Next World Background all i can say is all i know is that the world call Midgard it's the same as earth. There's VR also the MC roll in an academy that teach special people (wanderer) in Tokyo. Politic, History, Culture hasn't still fleshed out yet.Finally Plot. The only thing i can say about this is that it's a mess. Reason i still don't know what the hell the plot going to be about, or where this is going. First i thought it was about how to grow as a god or the intricacy life of a god and those affected by him. Since the synopsis felt like it's about character growth. then i read it, and after a couple of chapters i thought "oooh it's not about growth then is it about taking over stuff, or trying to be rich, or something like overlord " since the MC literally a GOD then the MC going to the academy i thought "ok is this novel going to be like 'to be a power in shadow'" then no since the MC to not a manipulative or liar type and then the VR came. i hit my desk and think yappppppp i don't know where the hell this is going anymore and to make it worse the author state and i quote "Little did I know at the time, that this game would end up shaping my destiny, and bring me powerful allies and enemies." OK THEN THE NOVEL ABOUT OVERGEAR ON DRUG AND THE MC IS A LITERAL GOD!! that's what i think after that thankfully the author eat some candy and make the game stuff over and i say "fyuhh thank you" buttt the author don't let me down yet nononononono. i read a couple chapter and guess what next....? uhuh you guess. It FICkINGGG SINGING and idol "ALL HAIL AKB VAMPIRE GOD YAHOOOOOOOO DAADYY KISS MEE PLEZZZ!!!" at this time i don't know am i the one on drug or the author eat something weird but i'm looking forward for the MC to become a shining idol that beacon life to all living form in the world and show his white blessing to the undeserving "ALL HAIL THE MC DADDY CYANIDE" then i pray i pray hoping for the original plot to came back when i lose all hope it came "it came back? the school chapter came back!!?" i shout then i remember everything came back to me he's still a minor and a student suddenly a white liquid squirt to me. Then i realized this novel make me reach the apex of humanity i reach enlightenment cover in white hot stuff i threw away my pill after that i spread my hand and stand on one leg after that i read again and saw the roommate become gay and two vampire also become gay i have found it the answer i make my self bald and opened google and type ***.vampireXroommateXclydeXme.com "i found it" i smile "lord Clyde had shown me the way" i shout while doing the T pose. Chapter 18 My lord cynide ascend he's finally ascend to the throne i pray once again to my lord cynide "DADDY" I scream hoarsely, i pray once a gain but before i can pray again. I'm shook. In front of me i saw it a man that look like my past self dancing fortnite default tauntingly, i fight it but only to find myself getting possessed "NOOOO" i scream "you're mine boy" He said "LORD CYN-DE" I Scream painfully. Chapter 19 I'm Back it look's like the Baldmen has died now let's just jump into the overall shall weConclusion: the character need some rework especially the MC right now the MC felt like a hollow being instead of an ex-human if you're going with this route in the future then i retract my statement. side character especially male need rework i find the roommate as of chapter 19 to be a yes men instead a Best friend please make them say no instead yes all the time. like WTH they wanted to sold their humanity to join some weird dude that they just met. Need a little bit infodump example money in the novel the MC state that ooh 2000 yen is this much in dollar i mean different world different kind money price you know like inflation and what year it is. I think if the MC say "i just google it it say 2000 it's this amount in $" will fix the issue another thing in the game where the MC surrounded by 200 kobold from nowhere he know about the kobold its structure also kobold king if you make the party member that say it instead will make it beliveable since they have played it longer it also created more personality for his best friend plot it really need to be consistence about what you wanted to make either game singing plotting or harem as of chapter 19 i can see that you mix it together but i believe you should hadn't done that you should give that to other character to make them more distinct instead and make the MC focus on other thing instead. this novel is not for me because i'm into edgy thing and what i mean by edgy like really f@%k up world. You're novel definitely for casual reader it's not my piece of cake but thanks for letting me read it. For those that read this review try read this novel, sure at first it hard to swallow. but the author keep improve it's plot even myself keep changing my review at every chapter because how distinct its improvement from the last chapter.but at the end of the day it's your work author will you read my review or not it's your choice all i can say is that don't let other decided which path is the best for your novel. Just enjoy it and write to your heart content
The story is great! But the updation is not consistent. it would be great if the story is updated Daily consistently. Also, a very short chapters.
YOU GUYS ARE REALLY IMPRESSIVE,I READ ALMOST ALL YOUR STORIES.YOU HAVE A LOT OF INCREDIBLE STORIES,KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND I WILL ALWAYS BE READY TO READ YOUR BOOKS.
Nice as ice friend I like it very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very much if you keep working with a story like this don’t give up even when it is hard I can guarantee your story will flourish
Hi, author, it's a captive read...I'm not a fan of the cultivated story but your book hooked me well. I'm eager to know more and more about MC's life.....
I need to sit down. The mess hall scene is genuinely one of the most emotionally charged sequences I've read in a while and I'm not even being dramatic. Wen Jianing walking into a room full of soldiers who are basically shirtless and sweaty, feeling all self-conscious, and her INSTINCT — after all these years apart — is still to reach for Song Tingyue's arm. The text goes: 'Some habits were so deeply ingrained that even years apart couldn't erase them.' And then it flashes back to all these childhood memories of her clinging to him during thunderstorms, running barefoot through the dark, throwing herself into his arms. And now as an adult she does the exact same thing and then PULLS BACK because she remembers he only agreed to take her in to 'repay the Wen family.' That moment where her fingertips stop 'barely an inch away from his sleeve' — I literally gasped. She's been holding back this physical need to be close to him this whole time and it just comes flooding out in one instinctive gesture. And then the self-scolding: 'Wen Jianing! What are you doing?' But here's what killed me — Song Tingyue NOTICEDShe's the one who needs him, who instinctively reaches for his arm when she's scared, who calls him 'Brother' in this tiny soft voice that apparently does something to him. And his reaction when she pulls her hand away just before touching his sleeve — the text says 'irritation flared inside him' and then he unnecessarily punishes a recruit for wearing an undershirt. That's not about military discipline, bestie. That's a man who just got rejected by the person he's trying to take care of and he's taking it out on the world. The subtext is SCREAMING! Also the moment she calls him 'Brother' at the end — 'Her voice was tiny. Soft. Sweet.' and his fingers tighten around his chopsticks? He's trying so hard to maintain this cold commander persona but she literally just undoes him with one word. The dynamic between them is everything.' and gets genuinely irritated. He notices the dusty sleeve she avoided and thinks 'Then what is this little brat finding fault with now?' He's hurt. He's actually hurt that she won't let her guard down even a little. And then she chokes on water and he's across the table in an instant — 'Before Song Tingyue had even swallowed the food in his own mouth, he kicked his chair aside and was beside her in an instant.' The way he holds her, the way his hand reaches her waist and he thinks 'She was simply too small' — this man is completely gone for her and he doesn't even know how to handle it.
this is great. everything is on point.keep up with the work author. good luck.???????????????????????????????
Has the same bookcover as :closed beta that only i played.It is mirrored and the color got a bit changed.
writing quality:4. not many problems and it is legible. Some editing would really help.stability of updates:5. very frequent. not much else to say here.story development:5. story is developing. fast. very fast. mainly due to the insane leveling speed of the main character that there needs to be a fast plot development.character design:2. main character is bland. side characters are bland. every person seems bland. All that is known is a not very ugly guy grinding in insanely fast speed because he knows things due to reincarnation and that he isolates himself.world background:2. not enough details that would explain the world. It is one thing to neglect the real world as the main focus is the game but to neglect the world building in the game as well? that's a big mistake. in the beginning village it can be excused because MC really just skipped past it and just grinded until he could enter the city. But even after he enters the city there are still no details. MC just goes somewhere and he is there. where is the direction? what does the place look like? what are the landmarks? MC is just grind grind grinding that the world building is severely lacking.THE BIGGEST FLAW OF THIS BOOK: EXP GAINBefore level 10, the exp for a level up seems to be in the hundreds. between 10-20 the exp seems to be in the hundred thousands seeing the levels he gained from killing first boss class monster. okay. explainable as he has 300% exp gain from his title. good explanation right? no. MC is a VERSATILE class, which author stated IS INSANELY HARD TO LEVEL UP. Following that reasoning, MC should at best be slightly ahead of the other players, given his knowledge from reincarnation that gives him an edge over others. However, by chapter 34 every other player is still below level 20. guess where our MC is at? OVER 50. Author also stated in the beginning that it took him about 25 years to reach level 500 so here I thought it would take awhile but our MC gets to level 50 is like less than a week (or is it a month?). In any case. at that pace, MC will probably get to level 500 in probably a year.Don't expect too much. It's not the worst, but neither is it the best. If you can ignore the exp problem, this is great for reading if you got nothing else and are waiting for other novels to update.