I just found this novel 2 days ago and so far this is one of the best story I ever read. The characters are well delivered and the story itself is written in a nice way. Keep up the good work author-san.
actually this novel doesnt have 1300+ chapters.It has just 20-30 chapters and rest is just recursion same ****.One celled characters.All enemies are just same **** :D just different names what a joke novel.Same battles with just cultivation names changed :D everything is same **** worst novel you can read.
Brutal translation speed and zero communication has killed this novel. Hopefully qidian responds at some point and we get back on track. Started as a great translator but unfortunately real life became too much and this has been dropped
Fairly good. Might be shaping into a harem but I'll have to wait and see. There are some cliche bits but not too bad. The MC seems to have more depth to them than typical WebNovel standards.
All in all I think this is worth a read to see if it fits your tastes. I'm planning to add it to my collection and will only drop it if it turns for the worse.
I'm sad for this novel.
Because it never going to win the vote.
First of all, I have to say that the author's writing experience is oozing out of the chapters that I read. It overshadows a lot of the amateur works on this platform.
It is creative and has perfect wordplay and brilliant scenes.
The characters don't feel bland and one-dimensional like many others but they have a realistic touch.
Overall, this book is a must-read.
Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars (Lets be honest, who would give themselves less than 5 stars unless idk)
Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel;
Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though)
I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me)
Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)
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nice book
so interesting
nice book
so interesting
nice book
so interesting
nice book
so interesting
nice book
so interesting
nice book
so interesting
nice book
so interesting
nice book
so interesting
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I like the idea of the story, and it deserves 5 stars for it, but the mc and side characters' actions aren't what would really happen. The mc is sometimes smart and sometimes downright stupid. I think the mc and side characters' actions should be improved on. Otherwise everything else is good as the writing quality is quite good and the chpater lenght is nice. I would definitely recommend this book to be read by others. Sometimes, you need to ignore the dumb actions made by the mc, simp mc*.Mc: Every time somebody accepts a womans request, that acts like a little girl. Bro has had multiple chapters to change his personality, but the next chapter bro is again the same that he was before.Points to ignore while reading:Mc personalitySidecharacters personalityPower level with the mcs wives. Bros girlfriends have like 1 skill but are still almost as strong as him. Like, bro has 10 skills, but bro gets 18 kills of a D rank while some random girl gets 14 D rank kills with just a slightly bigger mp amount and a single spell. Bro himself has like 3 spells. He should be at least like 5 times stronger than all those side characters. Like at least equal to a peak C rank peak.If I were this mc, I would do much better. Even if I am scared, I would still have a change of heart after experiencing life and death situations. This guy is just the same, and the author explains it with him wanting to fight a lot and liking the thrill of it, but still, if he were like that, it would show in his notmal actions but bro just scared of everything when sth happens. But when there are dungeon outbreaks, bro goes in without question, and when in the fighting place, bro still fights that champion without knowing anything about him even though he already got the sword. It wasn't like he didn't have any other way to gain control of the sword. The sword is so strong, but gaining control of it just takes just a few lines.These are all the things to ignore when reading the first 100 chapters or so. Still, it's a good read, but I would still be a better mc.
I really love this book. Author should keep up the good work