I feel annoyed on MC in early chapters (I dont know if she will change for the better) she's so coward that I want to strangle her, so pathetic that I cant take it anymore.
{Second Review}Got to say things are getting interesting, can't wait for the next hundred or so chapter's.
Very good one of the best i have read in a very long time i hope this doesn't get dropped and has a lot more chapters it is to good to be dropped
First of all theres a lot of issues but theres a lot of pros as well, its more rather a mindset story that changes whetever its good or bad from the reader reading.
The story became really good from chapter 17 onward. The plot at the beginning is a little confusing but the author somehow make it plausible later on
This novel is a typical example of unbalanced game play. Which makes it dreadfully boring, because after 10 chapters it is already clear, that the only way for the MC to face any setback at all is for him to make stupid mistakes. After reading 30+ chapters, I can only stop because it is stupidly boring.Comparing it to doomsday online is doing a disservice to doomsday online, because in this novel the MC becomes a God compared to everyone else in less than 10 chapters. And there are no side characters, side quests, interesting story twists or literally anything good about this novel to balance that flaw.You want proof? Author needs to use a timeskip of 7 days (compared to the 1 actually described) in the first few chapter. Literally 80% of the time is skipped before chapter 40(I didn't read more).The power progression, time line, cost-benefit ratio, level progression, admin behavior etc. makes absolutely no sense in this novel.Example: MC reaches level 10 in 1/2 day.Others need 5-7 days to reach level 10.Mc needs those 5-7 days to reach level 15, but many others who needed at least 5 days to reach 10 are already at level 12 on day 7.Mc has a monopoly on field bosses, areas, quests and literally anything else for at least 4 days, while possessing at least 2 times the stats of any other player and 3 times more and better skills(at least 6 purple skills) in addition to gaining perfekt loot every hour. But MC leveling in those skipped days, in which he did not leave his room and only played that one game, is worse than any other random noop from a guild.The MC is portrait as a random every day guy, but his first day he is literally the God of speed runs, who makes no mistakes, uses his environment for his advantage and hoards overpowering skills like no other.Then he is a noop during timeskip and returns to being a perfect arrogant gaming God right after. Of course, not because he is actually competent, no, the rest of the characters are just incompetent and brain dead.Giving a single coin, fast pass or wathever to this novel is simply a waste.Don't read this shit, it's an abomination.
I was the previous translator for this novel, and it's a great read to those of you guys who like OP mcs and the Litrpg genre in general.Translation quality:3/5. Subpar, but definitely decent. Although there are many things I disagree on such as the various character names as well as the arbitrary switch from 'free points' to 'omni points', the translator doesn't fall short of other Qidian translators. I rewrote some entire parts to intensify the story as well as fight scenes to make the story better on my own discretion, but if the translator doesn't want to it's his decision. The editing is horrible though, if there's one thing Qidian needs it's better editors. Multiple typos, spelling mistakes and one out of every two sentences was badly phrased. Translation would've been 3.5/5 if it weren't for editor. So tempted to join Qidian as an editor. Stability of Updates: 5/5, since it's Qidian. I mean, duh.Story Development: 5/5. One of the best Litrpg/Magic novels, and the plot certainly isn't cliche.Character Design: Uh this is a CN novel so you obviously don't have character development. But the personalities of the various characters do remain consistent so a solid 3/5. World Background:4/5. It does well on world-building too though it doesn't focus on that aspect. This novel has a good author.
Despite some minor typos in the synopsis, this Novel proves to have quality writing and an engaging story despite the occasional typo or misplaced word. The Novel uses a somewhat unique take on transmigration, a Mc rather stoic in disposition as well as constitution, and an eccentric master that walks the line between genius and total insanity. 15 chapters in and I will definitely keep reading.
This is taken, if not stolen from GRAVITY TALES (The original translation deserves the 5 stars, not the one here, just letting you know)So please just noThis is bad and meanJust type nicely on google and read it on its own siteI really hate how qidian steals like thisConcentrate on your own works for onceThere are like 3 novels I love that the translations are slower than antsGo translate Jun Jiuling or Village Girl or Apocalypse MeltdownAll these novels could use some actual translatingThank you.
I'm not yet done with all chapters but please do not stop releasing chapters. I can read all the chapters very fast. ?????☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Mediocre at best. I dont't know if its the translator or the author, but up to ch.80 there is just a lot of inconsistency between chapter and even paragraph, for example at some point it said MC got 3million silver, while few chapters ahead says he broke, never mentioned spending on anything expensive.Another example says "surprisingly he discovered that something add power, but so small that he didin't realize it. WTF man, he discovered but not realize?Beside all that, this novel just got nothing special on it. Lots of CN out there use repetitive template, but that still a better offer, cause they got something unique and special. This on the other side, doesn't use much repetition, but it just lack something 'addictive' that makes you want to read it again. The fight description is good, very good, but that's it. You skip it and you still understood it.The development of the story just plain, nothing worth mentioning. Even the MC is plain, got no quirk except his hardworking, MC might as well be an NPC.
Everything is near perfect, why it isn't perfect is that nothing is perfect but this novel is close to it. Writing is of top quality and you can really immerse yourself with this story. I recomment this story to everyone, even if you dislike an evil main character. I will definetly keep on reading as long as you keep those juicy chapters coming!