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She tried 'illuminating' it with her thoughts, only to find her mental power draining fast.
I'll be downvoting this for the sole purpose of breaching the moral conduct of respecting the What's Next queue.While I'm unsure of what allowed this to happen, we as users have the power to review it based on our point of view and in mine this was and still is a huge mistake, which is why I won't support this novel.
Dear God!1. Protagonist is not an idiot2. Protagonist is not a spineless coward3. Protagonist understands basic ethicsWhat is this sorcery!? Am I dreaming?Usually for typical CN/JP novels on here we get, at best, pick 2 out of 3: either protagonist acts like an unforgivable asshole (CN), or is ***** to the point of having a 12 year old mentality (JP). READ THIS NOVEL if you are sick of the above and want something more serious and realistic (as far as sorcery and fantasy go, anyway)Greatest appreciation to author, translator, editors.
an amazing story with very unique characters
I have nothing bad so say about this novel. It is a very good novel in every sense. Only con would be the mix up of the women's names every once in a while. But even then, it doesn't take away from it.
Come on boys and watch as Vaan slays bishes and lays witches.Harem?A good plot with bits of 'plot' mixed in.?Never gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?
Author here and as the author, I will shamelessly give myself a five-star.Hehe, that aside, I had promised myself I will only give this book a review once it reaches the 50th chapter which we have happily reached.Now, unto the storyThis is my first time writing a Chinese novel and it's challenging because I research all the time.I will review my book in different sections.Writing Quality: I don't have a good writing quality as I edit my book a lot. I speak English but it's not my first language and it's hard because I tend to mix up some words together, so forgive me if you find some mistakes.Story Development : I can't say a lot for this because I tend to go with the flow which is something I enjoy. I like the thrill of wanting to know what the next chapter has in store for me.Character Design: I will give myself a five-star here because I believe I have crafted beautiful characters and let me say something, my favourite character is Xin Yi, the FL's brother. Don't ask me whyUpdating Stability: Two chapters daily, I give myself a pat on the back because I have been doing a good job so far (But if I can get magic castles, three chapters in addition to my normal two chapters daily)World Background: I have really done a good job here or so I think.Basically, just keep reading and see what Xin Yan and Li Qiang has in store for us. I'm also eager to know.Thank you for supporting me thus far.
Great novel, keep it up, its something new which is greatly appreciated.The characters are interesting and it has a decent world building.
I kept my word and leave my review. Please take a look at my book.I want to point out that I haven't read all of them because there are so many chaptersFirst of all, I was impressed by your writing language. You really expressed yourself very well. The structure of the world and the processing of the characters are really nice. The episodes seem a little long but never uncomfortable.I recommend you to read it.
It's a good book to read has good characters but Author needs to improve writing quality of book. ....................... ...........
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