AWESOME BOOK I have read all of them, please write more mafia stories I loved this book
This was a great story. A few name swap issues, but nothing too serious. I would love to read an epilogue of this book
bro failed in just 1 month
In my language that means "bye bye"
I saw a guy replied to me about this novel 3 months ago. Recently im bored af so i just decide that it costs nothing reading this novel to get my own parallel memory. Lets go. ?
Peak.
Whats great about it is :the mc palpable personal growth without suddenly becoming another person, very fair and balanced power system, side characters are very interesting and i think its cool how u can draw a personality chart about them by comparing their reactions and tidbits of their lore across multiple loop iterations.
Cons: as someone else said it definitely needs some side stories, i personally didnt like what happens after the ending, i wanted more closure with more side characters, i personally wouldve liked more than just tidbits regardings the cooler characters.
NAH BUT BFR A FLIGHT SKILL USER, SUCH A CUTE BABY, IF NOT FLUFF AND BLONDE THEN WHAT ELSE
Well, i'm dropping this...
I don't even know how this novel made 'top 30', but I don't think it deservers it. I agree that world building is good and power system is good. God, MC is a simp to the point of extreme. He acts arrogant after simple power up and gets beaten up by a random character. MC make rookie mistakes and flexes before young masters and decides not to kill until author drags story. It is worse than many braindead chinese novels. At least Chinese novel's MCs can man up and kill his enemies. But this novel's MC is too much of a simp to kill his enemies and he lets them play with for hundreds of chapters.
It's like author is doing everything he can to make MC into a simp and a pushover.
Is it weird that, "I" as a male enjoy female lead books where she is either the villainous but is misunderstood and becomes stronger and kicks everyone's butts, or just very independent and doesn't really need anyone. But it has to be in a fantasy world, since I love the action still.
This is the second novel I'm trying. I hope people may like this, as there are very less fan fictions of cartoons. I wanted to create a better story but now other villains and heroines will be added.
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I'm ngl outside of time is better than renegade immortal
That's what you think