This is my first time writing a review for a book and I can say that this has a lot of potential.It has been a while since I read about a non-dumb mc and this gives me a different feeling compared to the other VRMMORPG novels and it gives a fresh
feeling.Continue the good work author.
I'm very much looking forward to this being picked, it's great so far, primitive novels like this are rare, other than this one I can only think of Chronicles of Primordial Wars.
PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS HAVE MERCY ON MEE! I NEED THIS IN MY DAILY LIFEE!
Author please, translator please, everybody pleaae I want 100 chapters tomorrow :( pleaseee!
It is s great novel. I like the context of the new world and the rarity of his thinking not to talk about his ability. It isn't like your normal system novels. I think this novel has a big chance of growing. I think this novel does deserve all my daily powerstones
well not bad as a story. very cliche MC lots of grammer errors (some parts are not readable) would recomend aurthor to use some kind of edting software. chapter locks start to early.
Hello, Author again, it is officially chapter 100, my first milestone! at first, I doubted my novel because I'm new and didn't know much about writing properly so, now! (Though still improving) I'll definitely recommend you read the novel, I don't know how my novel is because my head is filled with spoilers so, if you could tell how it is it'll help me a lot so, Thank you! ✌️
The story starting is little overboard. But the MC's characters are really good and evolves along with story. Loved their interactions woth each other and the baby.
I like to read web novels on my phone in my spare time. There are a lot of good authors and good books. I’m only on here to read for pleasure. If you don’t want your readers to be able to read your writing... then don’t write AT ALL! I’m honestly curious, what’s the point of doing this?
Hello, Shameless author here, first time writing a fanfic after being on webnovel for about three months now, didn't even know how to write and post my chapter using it, just uploaded the first complete one today, I accept advice in how to write and how can improve my work. Thanks
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I love the way you write fr. It's like everything is being narrated by a calm background voice and everything is so easy to picture. I genuinely love it and will keep on reading.
Good I think I don't know what comment really