seems pretty good with the whole 3 chapters I've read
It's a very good story, I also recommend some of my friends. plot need some work, all around its's a nice story.
It is really good. I like the story and were it is heading. I can’t wait for the author to make a new chapter. I just started reading this today and I am already loving this book.
Hi there, Author here. Just leaving a comment and leading a good example for the future. Thanks for joining me on this journey! Gotta give myself five stars
This is like one of the best Yandere harem novels out there in my opinion. We have an mc who was just a typical avg nobody who got thrusted into the world of supernatural by him getting married to his first 3 wives. its journey man, seeing a weak ill guy turn into one of the strongest being, meeting new people, finding out old friends who were also involve with the supernatural world, having cute mother in laws, a lot of oyakodons, witnessing one of the most hated goddess getting character development and turn into one of the best character in the story and helping mc along the way.
Mc himself is an extreme yandere for his wives too which was a nice touch in the story, how to tame a harem of yandere? become an even bigger yandere haha. Also this novel has a really big yandere harem with many lovely girls, so enjoy the ride.
Final thoughts: as of chapter 777 it has its ups and downs but over all its a fantastic novel.
Such a good story ah..but the name is quiet crud I still like the flow of the story and suit my taste so I'll support it...
Just like now I liked how you write the events and the world background. Your words is easy to understand, I'm a filipina so I'm not proficient in english but reading this is quiet good. Deep english is difficult to understand for me. Anyway thank you for your update. Pls update so quickly I'm seeing your story in the future I'll support it hehehe
The story has a lot of potential, but it is wasted in a easily evitable way.
The most common problems are:
- LOL.
- The author explain as something work just to forget it and making it work in a different way.
- Irrealistic or dumb plot device (alert minor spoiler, jump to the next point if you don’t want know: an explosion that erase 75 square km of the city where the mc is, but he says he doesn't know anything because he didn't watch the news and he was at a friend house, friend that previously he said was in the same city. To not add that even though the explosion happened in a residential district there were just 67 deaths).
- Expression used in the wrong way.
Although I may sound harsh (both here and in the comments) I don't want to offend the author, but just point out thing that in a much needed rewrite should be corrected.
As said before the novel has a lot of potential and it sadden and annoy me to see it wasted.
I hope to not have offended or upset the author with this review or my other comments.
actually rating is 2 stars
the plot is a fairly common one with all the generic troupes but compared to others i have read this one is a lot more xenophobia if not for some ok ok interactions between character one could say this written purely for the purpose of whitewashing most of crimes from Chin ese people to foreigners or Chin ese who came back to Ch ina from abroad
to those who read the synopsis, just read on for a bit more chapters since the first few chapters feel quite odd and different from the synopsis.
What a nice light read! Easy and pleasant to read and waiting for more……
Don't buy the privileged chapters, they haven't updated anything for almost a month, an this book is most likely getting drop by the T.
ffs.
Truly engaging with new sub-plot lines for every dungeon the MC encounters. The MC is quite the capable person and makes the best of every opputunity that may or may not come his way by diligent assessment of his surroundings; and the use of cunning and pure willpower to live on to deal with dangerous moments. The supporting player characters are individually intriguing in their own right. (Lawless is a particularly humorous side character pair with our MC-the straight man in this comedy duo) The natives to the various dungeons the MC enters are all spectacularly realistic during their interactions, leaving the reader terribly saddened by their short and limited show time. In conclusion, this is quite a thriller action-packed story with a
level-headed MC worth investing in.