This is my first review..... good story line, not sure if it was terrible translation or terrible writing but it made it that much harder to read.
No one is talking. Haha.. I'm bored.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Isnt this just Realm "Of Myth And Legends"??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ( realm of myths and legends is it great book by the way)
the japanese novel one is in real-world, if im not wrong its called "curing incurable disease with semen(dropped?)
What do you expect???mc name is SCOTT ..he starts cultivating... other characters are Chinese, basically an everyday Chinese novel when author try to change names to Western..trash
I like this novel and I just loved it! No words, just applause ??.I like your passion and updating has always . Keep up the good work Author.☺️
Hello and an honest review from me. Somehow I find it's funny when everyone (the NPCs) were serious in doing their roles meanwhile the MC is in his own world? interesting story so keep it up, author??
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I have nothing much to say. Good old straight forward cultivation story like Martial World.The characters are better designed. Good and emotional moments. Fighting is well described.
Ohhh yes daddy likes that so give me. Oh and author you better make the Mc at least not a v#rgin and i hate v#rgen Mc's and at least make a humanoid beast harem cuz I think some of us here are waiting for beast s#x
So far ive Read 43 chapter its an good and has amazing potential but i think there are some thIngs that need to fixed:1. Mcs control over is emotions when he fights bc he kills without thinking and causes quite a lot if problems for his family trying to “protect” them, if he continues like this he’ll be the reason for their deaths. A why to fix this in my opinion which i think is absolutely nessecary any way is a skill i call “absolute control” (absolute control over his mind,body,and arua) is goes with his title of an assassin and the author has mentioned he is not in control of his mind 50% and is suppressing an inner monster in which will get rid of these problem or at least help2. repeative fighting style for 2-3 chapter per fight i can pretty much sum it up for in 3 words... dodge,strike, and kill. for 400 years of fighting its pretty bland so i propose : A skill i call “god of mastery” its use is simple he gets instant mastery towards any martal arts and cold weapons but the priority will be daggers,katana, ninjato, bows, and needles/posion,ect.And 3. which think would be a great skill “phantom/light manipulation” a skill in which is he intangible to physical to at a certain amout and can also conseal his arua and only those that are stronger then him can sense him/ his mana. he can also become one with a shadow or become invisible.This is my first a probably last review like this so hope it good. :)
I think I am going to drop this story from my reading list, I used to really like the story but the writing quality and translation quality has dropped sharply. I can't follow what is going on in the chapters any more.