[Ratings are based off trial read standard]So ive read up to the start of payed chapters and honestly, for a trail read, this novel isnt that bad. The worldbuilding isnt very fleshed out if you are new to the genre but if you are enough is explained to not be totally confused.The system is also done pretty well with a lot of hard work and commitment needed for development , although it seems the alchemy cheat is a bit much with the context we have been given about the difficulty of pill refining in this world.The first few chapters obviously have the villian who bullies the mc, but the reason is clearly explained and is justifiable with the setting and is, i believe, temporarily relieved early on to start the actual story.Future Female MC has been introduced yet the description so far is vague but her character is slowly being drawn out and is quite respected and an actual character instead of 'ivory skin and peachy lips with cloths that barely cover her'.Also the daugher is really cute so far and isnt annoying which they sometimes can be unintentionally. Especially if she is taught the skills of her Mother and the MC, she could become a really good character in future chapters/arcs.Thank you for reading, im not ue to doing reviews but wanting to write more for trial reads up to the paywall.
Don't laugh at me, readers! I am giving myself a full five-star review. Why? Because no one gives a review to this cultural book!
I love it the creativity is nice and I like the character it's good I would rate it an 10/10 and if u could I would sponsor it I love it it's a 5 star
A good one, light read and slightly fast phase, and I enjoyed reading just dont make it toooooo OP a little bit challenge is good too.. Keep the chapter coming
I was really pleasantly surprised of how good this was and then when i reached the end i found out that this is the same author of one of my other favorite books !!! I cant wait to see what direction you take this in!
MC is a sucker.The author is probably a cuckold.But do give it a try, maybe you too are a disgusting cuckold.Really do hate the character limit, huh?
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Alright I liked the concept of your story. A shameless layabout who likes to take short cuts and want to be king of all trades. Me being that demographic, I can guarantee you that I would not start with being a farmer. I would like to do stuff that I can get the most out of with least amount of effort and time wouldn't matter to me. I don't know why he is in such a hurry to get level 10 fast. Slow and steady is the game of the lazy king. I would probably start with gambling. get some money through black jack. Not a lot but $100,000 or so through a couple different casinos than get good in poker and his money trouble goes away. Money can't buy happiness but neither can being poor and money does help in many ways like helping his mother. After that slowly learn everything that he needs to.
So far, pretty amazing! I love the premise of a first person book and how the main character doesn't talent, but we all know that the main character does have talent (we just don't know when it will appear.)I don't know mucj but about the world background but the character design is pretty 'un mature, kid-like, naive." I don't know. Maybe the main character will grow.
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Those who give few stars could be more explanatory or even recommend novels in which they explain while explaining the point of view that is missing in this novel if possible please, thank you for reading my novel, it already makes me very happy that you think it's great, good, Terrible or Horrifying of course if the complaint is about grammatical spelling forget it I'm terrible so even if I copied a good work it would be bad hahahaha