unreadable. Even usual trashy MTL is heavenly next to that. If not for being able to review before even reading, it would be at 1*. Do not lose your time with this.
This is dreadfully dull novel. It's so generic that there is nothing that distinguishes this novel from anything I've read before, I'll likely forget it ever existed in a few days. I have no issue with genericness and mediocrity, I read as many generic mediocre novels as the next guy. However, there is such a thing as extreme genericness and mediocrity which is exactly what this novel suffers from, it stops just being mediocre and turns into whatever this insufferable abomination is. This has no defining features, it's just a bunch of tropes slapped together. Paralysed sister, generic dystopian world with humans at the risk of extinction, miserable strength based hierarchy, dead parents, talent cheat, hiding abilities, knowing some pretty girl from a big family, fall from grace and the list just goes on really, I can't be bothered to list everything out.There're no ideas of any value or interest here. Decent translation and the execution isn't the worst thing I've read but this is just worthless honestly. 0/5.
It started out all great and interesting but the character is super inconsistent with what was established like being a super genius and coming from an underhand group. The mc makes decisions where he is not using his brain or being a thief. He acts all self righteous and it makes this novel bad for me to read.And also how is he taking so long to get strong when hes been stealing so much energy and it seems like it doesnt even benefit him.Even when he got the immortal rope, which is over powered, he doesnt use it to get rid of his enemies. To be honest, i think he just keeps all his enemies alive so that he can have more problems when the time comes.
Absolute Gem ? I really loved the storyline it's very different from other system novel, a change for better. Keep up the good work and please write to the end.
Newbie author here trying to not be a newbie anymore.Technically this isn't my first story, I have written few short stories as a practice and I am working on another novel other than this one—although that one's put on hold for now 'cause this one's my priority. That being said, it's the first one I'm really serious about.I guess couple of important things to know about this work is that:A) Magic = Tere isn't going to be any sort of system mechanism in this one. Not because I don't like, I do; it's just that I had no idea how to make it unique or intresting. Hence why I went with this route—plain ol' simple urban fantasy. The mechanism of the magic is interesting and diverse (...atleast in my head)B) Plot and world = My plot is going to be slow placed. It won't be going forward at a turtle's speed but still, relatively, it will be on the slower end of the spectrum. The world and all its parts will be explained in the story. That being said, for the first 3 arcs atleast the story will be set ok earth in a fictional town within India (so my MC and few of the casts are indians)3) Characters = This is where the main stuff is. I like to believe that a lot of my focus and plot movement revolves around characters like their interactions, developments, personal arcs. There's a lot of focus on the internal and external struggles of the characters.Other than that, my update schedule is mostly going to be 5 chaps/week, more depending on the scene but definitely not less. And each will be around the range of 1-1.5k words. My plan for now is to have thr first arc to be set free (which definitely going to be around 30 chaps or 40k words) and have it be paywalled later.In the end, all I'll say is that is give my story a try. Read it, think about it and tell me what you feel about it through comments or reviews. Your support would mean a lot and if not the support, your constructive criticism would be a big help too.Thank you for taking the time to read this and hope you like the story ?
I dont know where's the 'I mean...' reviews gone to but its not going to change how blast is this novel. I like women, and what they could do, and what I could do, so how cant I like this.Characters. Laughable characters. In a good way of course.Writing, kinda cool.Plot, new flavour at least for me.Keep on writing, story must be told.
Love your incredibly heartwarming stories. I wish you much success in your writing.. Good job and keep it up.. God bless you❤❤❤❤I'm a fan of yours❤❤❤❤❤
I can see that the author tried his best to make it epic. There's nice worldbuilding, though I would like it if you stretched that more. The main problem is stretching... your story looked too easy... stretch it, make ot more difficult and make it as believable as possible.There are quite a few grammatical errors... you should solve them asap, especially the punctuations.The writing style is easy on the eye with a bit of fixing it would be even more promising... Good luck... Author.
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I need to talk about how the pacing works here because it's genuinely impressive. Let me break it down. Chapter 6 starts with Xie Zhi already in damage control — she's salvaged the book, she's heading to Ninghuiyuan, she's already thinking three moves ahead. The chapter opens with action, not exposition. That's smart. We're dropped right into the tension. Then Chapter 7 — the reunion with Pei Hong — this is where the pacing really shines. The chapter starts with Pei Hong's injured face, which immediately raises questions. Who did this? Why? Then we get the gift scene, the walk to Guanxuelou, the hairpin moment... and then BAM. His father and brother appear. The chapter ends on a slap. Not a cliffhanger about what happens next, but a cliffhanger about what this means for Xie Zhi's plan. The structure here is essentially: threat (Yuyang) → temporary relief (Lady Yang's hall) → new opportunity (Pei Hong) → complication (father arrives). Each beat raises the stakes without ever letting the reader breathe. And the Qingyi conversation? Perfect pacing device. It's a quiet moment between two high-tension scenes, but it serves a purpose — it's where Xie Zhi's internal plan gets externalized. We learn her strategy through dialogue, not narration. That's efficient storytelling. The only thing I'd say is that the transition from Yuyang's confrontation to Ninghuiyuan feels slightly rushed. We go from "my life is over" to "let me make some book covers" pretty quickly. But honestly, it works because Xie Zhi's character is so clearly pragmatic. She doesn't have time to wallow.
I'm very interested in any book written by this author But my greed for more will not let me enjoy just this few chapters...Only chapter one, and I could feel the greed creeping in for more...I'll wait until a Little more to enjoy it well...
Bro there is already a manhua about it and it is more advanced .................................. .........FFFFFFFFfFFfFFFFfFFfFFFFFF