GabrielSilva8900
This type novel very good... reading this build mood better.... if you single so Read must.... Imagine yourself dragon and build Harem.. Fucking cool you know!!!
lin fan...should be gd...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
So here’s my review after reading eight chapters. Let’s start with the technicalities: in terms of grammar - there’s little to no errors; pacing - just right. The way of writing is new to me, especially the part where the author narrates as if I am the one in the book — that is an interesting way to write. However I’m still not used to the manuscript type of writing. But that may be preference as well.On the other hand, concept is intriguing, as well as plot. Well-researched also. Characters have depth. Nothing much I could really critique. Keep on writing.
I have to drop a star for this one.The update is way too slow only 3 chapters a week...i like reading new novels and form what have i seen so far(im not sort of expert) the stories that has fast release gets more attention than the slow ones so i hope the author increase the rate and not just add bonus when place in ranking cause readers only tend to vote when there is a chapter uploaded.although im one of the few people who vote for this everyday im having doubts to continue supporting coz theres a lot of interesting original stories with fast release.that all....
This reminds me of Superman’s backstory scientist saves his son and sends him to another world where he has a special power check check and checkOverall good story I would enjoy reading more keep it up
I do like this novel what was he the all god immortal than kills himself that's the only bull**** part now he's a super farmer what's his rank (E) hope he doesn't kill himself again.
The story has an interesting concept and decent writing quality, so I would recommend other people to give it a read. Its a good story that I would like to read more of but the updates come whenever the author has time to work on the story. I know that personal life gets in the way of writing, but I had to reread two previous chapters because I forgot what happened before due to the gaps. So be warned, this isn’t one of those stories where there is a 5k - 10k word update every day.
Well, I honestly think that this story has a lot of potential. It kinda reminds me of beggining after the end with a bit of differences here and there. Anyways, Goodluck author, keep it up!
Generic story with boring mc. Every sentence is one paragraph with no period at the end.Stinks of AI or mtl.
I couldn't understand it at all. Sucky descriptions of characters, bad grammar, bad character development, and wtf do you mean get can talk while being only three years old and everyone acting like he could talk before that.
I recommend a proofreader for this novel because the writing is downright horrible, however I commend the author for the superb story!! I got hooked the moment I started reading this!!!
i think there's manhua of this currently being translated by webnovel????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
