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not sure why this story isnt more popular. one of the better FL stories. strong, smart, funny, cute, and not constantly in need of saving.
world(s) are interesting and, while the cultivation/portal setting in not original, there is enough uniqueness to make the story stand out.
characters work well together and are fun to read about. there isnt much character growth. mostly becoming comfortable in their own body. but the leads are strong competent adults so not sure they really need to grow. it mostly just fun to see how they will react to changes.
no crazy plot armor or last minute saves by the heavens. just competent people accomplishing their missions. which is actually nice compared to every minor outing turning into a world altering cataclysm with diving treasures popping up left and right.
plus if nothing else, the mc is a bloodthirsty, cute, wolf girl, who dresses like a pirate. with walking nuke of a mage as partner. that alone should be enough reason to read this.
sounds interesting, anyone have the raws name?
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The whole story is good. So many timeskips and the X-Virus is kinda similar to COVID-19. I didn't expect your chapters to have so many "—", and the first chapter doesn't have a speech, which is quite shocking. In overall, I had fun reading yours. Keep it up and good luck on your writing journey.
This story could go in brazzillion different ways and it will still be good. , honestly, I'm impressed. The twist and turns alone phew. dont know why he does not update really fast. fix that
I like this. Lately (As in a couple months) I've been seeing too much main characters that just get everything as soon as they start. I haven''t read much but this looks good.
The essay switches on and off with feelings and ends with feelings. This makes the essay consistent and coherent, and at the same time, makes the theme of the essay repeat, which is highly infectious.
We're going on this little journey with Marco and I can't wait to see where it leads .I'm really curious about Ayesha and him as well, that's going to be interesting .
I'm really enjoying reading this book.The way the author describes everything makes it really easy for me to envision it all.I generally love learning random stuff so I'm also enjoying the little words and meanings at the end of most chapters .I've got high hopes for the story so good luck to you
For referenece, im currently on chapter 89 out of 730ish. I feel like I've read enough to get the general vibe of the novel.
So far, I have a lot of mixed feelings about this novel. I'm going to list my pro's and con's and if I don't drop this I'll come back and update this review.
Pros:
- Unlike other system novels, the system doesn't baby the protagonist. He has to figure thing out himself for the most part, which is refreshing.
- The bloodline powers are really unique so far and I really like how his initial power was upgraded to something useful but not incredibly op. Hopefully the power scaling for him isn't to crazy and he doesnt bulldoze through everything later on.
Cons:
- Everyone from his parents to his classmates are cartoonishly evil. It seems like 90% of the characters in this novel are there so protag has a reason to act edgy and think the worlds against him. For example, I can understand his younger brother acting like a brat and cursing him at every moment because hes a child but his mother doing the same makes no sense in my opinion. If author wanted a "cold/abusive" parent making them treat protag like air/ being extremely distant would make more sense. Instead his mother also reads like an annoying brat despite being an adult...Same thing with school mates. It would have been more believable if only the main 3 bullies in the beginning were after him and everyone else was just distant and cold.
- The protag is way to edgy are certain points. For example, I have no idea why he treats FL horribly from the moment they meet. Its not like they have a bad history, he just seems to hate her for no real reason. I couldn't understand why he slams the door in her face on there second or third meeting...You think since everyone else is so aggressively mean to him he would appreciate who ever is nice to him. Author says its for characters development but an explanation on why hes so edgy in these types of situations is needed for this to even be remotely believable.
I love the idea behind this story. There are some mistakes here and there but not enough to throw you off because you will be drawn in from the first paragraph. One could tell the author is giving her all in this book, and I appreciate her effort. The book is added to library and awaiting new updates. ?
The whole plot was just full of unnatural and unrealistic events that completely ruined the immersion for me. The author just kept on forcing situations and writing bad characters with no motive other than to be cannon fodder for MC to face slap. It's essentially just a very surface level wish fulfillment novel which some people may enjoy so try it if that's your thing but I'd say otherwise you might be better off looking for something else.
ok so quick transition for MC is nice and while there's a fast growth for him it doesn't feel misplaced. incredibly excited to see how things go from here as I'm on chapter 38