Well... this novel has reached the levels of cringe I never thought possible.The story is very inconsistent or the translation is just bad so it misses the subtility/meaning in the original words. Honestly thinking about it I'm pretty sure the translation is just bad. Though the story is no better. Grammar is ok... readable. The plot is fk-in cringe... especially when the MC mixed some fruit juice and called it wine... and reading the titles he proceeded to sell a bottle for millions. Bruh... the author could have gotten so much better with the MC being a cooking prodigy and some other nonsense that is at least a little bit more believable and just more plausible and more interesting. But no... the author had to go full BS on this one.
Another week of trash trial novels. Guys do yourself a favor. If you're a fan of pet novels check out Museum of Deadly Beasts, the beginning is super cliche but the novel gets awesome later on (middle to late parts are amazing) and is much more original than 99% of the novels here. That's my recommendation for you pet novel lovers.
I read a couple of chapters and I'm completely entranced by your writing style. The imagery is just *chefs kiss* It almost feels like I'm IN the book, experiencing everything Marco is going through. Great work author, definitely looking forward to future updates!!
10/10, or 5/5 i guess.
PS: really good, just read my people
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why are so many Chinese novels this bad? where are novels like reverend insanity and other well written ones?
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The idea is really good just needs more polishing in writing and stroy telling. It would had been better to know more about mc in the first chapters. There are times that need more explaining about the things happening but overall all of it can be fixed or with enough time it could be better than now. Keep it up author. Take care.
The grammer in this novel is really good and i understand everything happening really well. The mc is very interesting and we as a reader are seeing him grow from being a simp. The lore and world building is unique and leaves you with many mysteries
the character sucks, is whiny, and to be honest it feels like a women from a self help group wrote this novel... (nothing against women author, i feel that the mc should be a woman from the latent male-male tension) i feel like my balls are shriveling up and my junk falling off reading about this p as in ussy. i think the writer should just write regular novels, this genre of writing is about escapism into fantasy not drag back into mental health clinic. sorry could not continue reading this trash.. i'll have to past on this.. also I suspect this is being busted artificially to get high ratings. please stop, this is very di
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One of the few trial novels I find interesting recently
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This is so good
oh it has me hooked now new chapters please ........ .....waiting ........waiting .. ......waiting. .......waiting........waiting... .....waiting ....waiting