Remarkably interesting. The novel was light at first but it keeps on progressing into more exciting events. Just keep an eye on the punctuations. Even if you're not a native speaker of the English language, you did a great job.
Im given it 5 stars because it sounds realllllllllly interesting also does anyone know where i can read it pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ......../ would love to know
Everything was going well until chapter three, what the **** did you need it for? boy is this one of the worst novels i've ever seen, seriously, the whole land has only chinese, and he still says it would destroy other countries? What the ****?
I rly like this novel, got quite a few original takes, an original writing style, good character designs.
what I was mostly surprised about is that the author seems to know his games, haven't rly seen any flaws that rubbed me the wrong way, which is pretty rare for a webnovel book, especially in the gaming genre.
There are some lose ends in the story, development, world setting, but like I said no real flaws, it's gonna be the authors choice how he is gonna knot them up later. He also took up some other difficult approaches which shouldn't be easy to write flawlessly, but till now everything seems good.
I,m really interested to see how this novel gonna develop.
now... negative aspects, there aren't rly anything obvious, maybe the story progression is a little on the slower side.
But something keeps constantly bugging me, the novel is rly amazing, but reading it is more like a relaxed read, it amazes me, but it doesn't make my blood boil, anticipate new chapters, burn with enthusiasm like some of the best reads of the hundreds I had. And I,m not quite sure where the problem lies. if it's the progression, or the battles, or the simple but on point writing style which makes it more relaxing.
or maybe it's cuz the setting was a little vague and the happenings right now are all still mysterious and I couldn't build a connection yet.
hmm... I think it's the last one.
well let's see, I might update this in a few months :p
good luck author, keep it up
Mc has a system yes and the reason for the 'video game' tag is because apparently the author views the MC's life as a video game due the system.
(Weird but okay)
I have read 9 chapters but I wanted to share my opinion, so the world background I really can't tell anything but from what I read is that mc resides in a fantasy world with goblins and a burning boar?
Also mc is a grasshopper that lost his memories from his past life and only can remember general knowledge. The higher level he is the more he will recall from his previous life.
Story development is your usual level up and become stronger. Currently the mc is just surviving as a tiny grasshopper.
Character design is a bit weird in my opinion. The way the story is told looks like the mc forgot everything, but he isn't. So you get sort of a vague feeling... It's not really in the way of your reading experience so dont worry.
SoU: 5* - as always
Translation Quality: 4.5 stars. There are minor instances of wrong names placed or commas. But I only saw 2 - 3 in 9 chapters and is barely noticeable.
All in all, give it a try. I will first read 39 chapters before I go to my next novel!
This is self promotion please don't attack me..........................................................................................................sorry for the dots i had to put 140 characters
this is the 3rd or 4th time that they are using this cover for different novels xD
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Okay so let me put this in here since the author hasn't bothered to. It is a harem. So if you're like me who are fed up with them then you won't like this story.
It was good up to here, grammar was awful but you could see it gradually get better witch is a plus.
The thing that has made me drop is you have guessed it the harem... kinda annoyed the author didn't put it in as I wouldn't have wasted my time if I knew. Worse is this is a modern setting so harem makes even less sense...
What kinda annoyed me is that the mc tries to justify that harems are okay and that only true love between a man and woman can have it. Like wtf it's like letting your significant other fck around, would you accept that? No, nobody would.
Yeah soooooo, gl to author but pls put in harem tag cause for all the ppl like me it's a waste of time and you wouldn't have to read comments like this.
This is so gooood!Ever since i start reading in this app,this is the first time i unlock the story to continue reading.Though it is only 3 charpters.Also this is the first I post a review. Sorry for my grammer and writing skill.I am not a native speaker.
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It was maybe one of the most original and interesting story I've read so far. The plot was intriguing. The characters blend together. However, it was very slow pace. The development of the story is sometimes too slow.
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