A great start can’t wait to see where its going. Somethings in the beginning like the Mc adaptability were a little questionable but you had the fl’s reactions to make up for it. I’d give the beginning a 4.5 out of 5
there are zoos but no hospitals
Basically, you get sick, these people go to zoos for treatment
It's obvious that these people have no brains
Ha! Ha! Ha!
Had high hopes on the novel. The synopsis was encouraging as well as initial chapters . But then things quickly went downhill. (dropped it on about chapter 30).
- Unnecessary extras. What do I care about the name of each of the 9 fingers of the villainous organization and what they look like. What does it matter to me that one of them attacked the office of local heroes and got off with heavy losses. And moreover, I don't care about a detailed description of his fight with the hero Porcupine.
- The weak emotional part of the work. In theory, given the circumstances of the hero and his ability, this should have become a pillar of the work. But no, this point is almost completely ignored. (The fact that this work is generally from a third person only makes the situation worse)
- Battles... what a masterpiece(no)... the hero is beaten - he flies away from inpact (unscathered). Beats the enemy in turn. If the enemy is weak, this is the end. If strong - enemy enters a new stage of his strength and the cycle repeats ... (and yes, according to the precepts of grandfather Madara, no one starts the fight in full force).
- Spoiler. I read the last chapters - the hero says that they defeated the gods and he himself became a god... it strengthened my resolve to grop the novel...
- And yes, romance. I usually have both hands for it in any work... but here it seems more pulled out of the finger than anywhere else
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I really like where this is going and can’t wait to see how the characters develop im personally into a little more descriptive and i guess you can word it in a nice way when it comes to The action But even despite that this is already one of my favorite reads
Wang Xue I wonder what that cat really I need to know badly.I have the next chapter can come out quickly I can not wait to read it.I love thing like blood and poison.I wonder if he going to get a martial Spirit with the blood or poison Attribute.
If you're looking for a fun, easy read that will transport you to another world, then look no further than The Bookstore Mage. Lucien's story is at once exciting and heartwarming, and I loved following him on his journey of discovery.
I particularly enjoyed the humor woven throughout the narrative. It had me laughing out loud on more than one occasion. The author has a real talent for lightening even the most tense situations with a touch of irony or a well-placed quip.
The world-building is also excellent. I could easily imagine the different settings and scenarios, and the creatures Lucien encounters are truly imaginative. I can't wait to read more chapters! [img=recommend]
Webnovel is on their A-Game this time, I mean two decent novels at once that’s unheard of.
I will just put five star for the hardwork I have put in this novel.
First of all I am not a chinese, so there will be some very minor mistakes.
I must warn you guys that the MC will be a very ruthless villian.
His personality will be between chaotic evil to chaotic neutral.
I write this review after reading 268chapters.At first, I thought this book would have a great future. But as we started nearing this future, I was left disappointed .First,here are the pros : - The author is devoted and constantly improving his writing skills.- The updates are quite regulars .- There's little to no info dumps, and everything is slowly introduced and explained.- The plot isintriguing .- The pace is nor quick nor slow.-There's some comedy.Then, the cons :- The characters are too shallow.There are so many chapters, yet it feels like we don't know enough about the characters. First, the MC. Alan is honestly sooooo annoying.Each time an important thing happens to him, it feels like he will grow as a person. However it's only that. A "feeling" . He is still that mentally weak person whom everyone brags about the potential but that we don't see acting as he should when the situation is dire. The case Ezra Fornum; thefight with the orc( if I remember correctly),were all occasions for him to grow more powerful; both physically and mentally. Yet, it didn't happen.Plus , he is always complainingabout his weakness, which makes hisinexistent progress even more annoying.Also , the mc isn't even a villain until now.(Ps: He is also not smart nor stupid, which some might not like.)Second , the fl . Sabrina's relationship with the Mc is so suprlerficial. Yet the author TELLS us that "they're SO in love! They just do not want to be together for now."Apart from the shallowness of theirrelationship, Sabrina herself feels 2D. Sure,we know about her background. But the fact is that we don't really know her aside from this. What is her goal in life ? What does she like ?What are her pet-peeves?lt feels likeshe's not really a person.And this appliesto every other characters of the book. - The author gave a too powerful cheat to the Mc.The ice dragon breathing technique ( if I remember well) made him go from E rank to C- rank at the first try . So if the technique is so powerful and the Mc wants to be strong, isn't using it( descretly) enough for him to attain his objectives ?There have been so many traumatizing events that him not using the technique sooner doesn't make sense.Moreover , recently( chapter 260 or ), he used it again and only got up to C- rank; which makes it SO obvious that the author is attempting to nerf the Mc. - The feelings are clumsily expressed .I honestly feel so tired of reading paragraphs of Alan rambling about his pain and burden. But if they are not exagerated, the emotions aren't palpable.This all mostly stems from the lackof description of the thing that provokesthese emotions and its possible impactson the Mc or his loved ones.For example, If a character is afraid of something, you can describe the thing accordingly from his/ her perspective . But describing it is not enough.One should also show the impacts of the said thing so the reader, too, genuinely feels how imperative it is for the Mc to win against it.-Last but not least , what are the Mc's goals?It is understandable that Alan is perturbed by the fact that he is only a sort of 'fake Alan Peccator '. However , his confusion shouldn't be stretched out for 100 chapters as it hasbeen the case since now.It seems that rather than thinking pragmatically , the Mc is evolving in his world and waiting for answers, which will not come if he stays as static as he is . All in all, this bookfailed my expectations. Nonetheless, I wish all the best to the author and pray for his improvement .
Nooooooo! Jia Hyson, what happened to you?! Why are you suddenly become a zombie emperor?! Where's Bebe?! Bebe, how could you let your host become a zombie?! He's already that pervert as a human, and now he's a zombie emperor!
By the way, author, who's the ML in this novel? Is it still the Bipolar System?
And I'm sorry, I can't give an appropriate stars for this novel yet, it's still too early to give rating and judgement. So, for now, I'm going give three stars as neutral score.
To add this story into your library just read the first chapter then you will realize how well written it is, keep on the good work Author.[img=recommend][img=recommend]