This is the best fan fic I've ever read. Really. Interesting point of views, perspective and attitude towards the Pokèmon world. Anyways, I've read the whole story, around 1453 chapters. You can find it on the Internet though so if you want you could look but it's mtl so :// Read in your own discretion.
Isn’t this pretty much a fanfic? How is it even legal to demand coins to read this story?............. ............. ............. .............
I hope this book is published as soon as possible ❤️
Im honestly surprised this got on trial reads, the writing styles bland and the story is full and full of cliches with under average plots and slow developments, not surprised this wasnt chosen
Not a professional breakdown of anything but here is what I think.
So boring. Granted I didn’t read much, and maybe it gets better, but what I did read started to bore me quickly. The start of a story should be the good but with it getting stale towards the end, but this was just tedious to read. The idea is cool, and if it was done well it could of been good, but it wasn’t. The MC was pathetic, and there were at least two plot holes. Arthur was supposedly amazing, yet he wasn’t even that good. Supposedly 80% of households watch people play, yet the MC didn’t even know the basic rules of the game. Didn’t make sense to me, I’ve never played some games yet I know how to play them. Another thing, who would just allow a spirit to control your body. It would be horrifying, imagine it. Not being able to control what you do, just being a passenger in your own body. It’d scare he **** out of me. Last thing I’ll mention is that Arthur wanted to create an unbeatable sword art, yet didn’t immediately try and teach his sword art to the MC. That didn’t make sense to me. Having another person well versed in your sword art would allow you to see flaws in it. Just my opinion, and I’ve only read about 20 similarly themed novels.
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Great concept with lots of potential. The best things to work on with a small concept piece like this would be to expand on details and make the story more full and give it life. My advice to the author would be to keep writing and constantly look at others work as well as asking for constant criticism from family friends and strangers(doing great there). Keep on writing!
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This novel has potential. The plot is fascinating and the author's writing skills is impressive. Can't get enough of it. Hope you guys check this out. Keep it up, Author. Hwaiting! ✊
This looks like it's going to be goooooood
I cannot wait to read this book I was drawn in by the synopsis. I so hope I'm not disappointed
Really unexpected, I'm not really into reading to all the details and stuff of a novel so the rating i gave was just based off my enjoyment of this novel, Its been really interesting so far and i dont think there's any translation issues, no faceslapping, not many dumb side characters, im really hoping that mc doesnt get a harem but i guess i'd be ok with it, thanks for the novel mr translator, please keep up the goodwork
It turns out that the voice that he heard was in fact just the early signs of schizophrenia rearing its head, so he died for nothing at all.
The end.