very intresting .............can't wait to read more..........................................................................................................
Your novel is quite interesting and the synopsis is also fine background's fine
on the minus side i just want to add that just write more words in order to elaborate more ^^ x
I advise you to read this story once later you'll keep coming to read next chapter .
author put details in a good way and story plot is also interesting .
A very well fleshed out novel, writing quality is excellent, zero to no misspellings, very good worldbuilding
Some small treasure for all Femboy fans.
it's one of the rare books which actually touched my heart
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I love your writing style, It gives more life and emphasizes the story line even more. The Author thought of a very captivating concept that will definitely leave the readers hooked and wanting for more. Keep up the good work, Author! Kudos!
GUYS STOP READING THIS STUPID NOVEL... JIANG HE BECAME A MURDERER!!!!!!!!!!!... IM READING THE RAW AND IM AT THE LATEST CHAPTER... WHEN HE BECAME STRONG HE KILLED ALL THE DISCIPLES OF A SECT.. ALL OF THEM EVEN THE INNOCENT.. JUST BECAUSE SOMEONE AT THE SECT WANT TO KILL HIM.. ANOTHER ONE IS HE KILLED ALL OF THE FOX CLAN(SECT) CAUSE 1 OF ITS FOX IS ATTACKING THE CITY... HE KILL THEM ALL.. THEY ATTACK JIANG HE BECAUSE HIS NOT EXPLAINING ANYTHING.. HE JUST GO TO THE SECT PLACE AND DEMANDING TO TALK AND HIS TOTALLY BEING UNREASONABLE.... SO OF COURSE LIKE A NORMAL INTELLIGENT BEING YOU WILL GET ANGRY... THEN HE KILLED THEM ALL JUST BECAUSE OF THAT.. MOTHERFKER... AND ALSO WHEN THE ANCESTORS OF THOSE SECTS THAT HE DESTROYED COME TO EARTH HE KILLED THEM... THEY JUST WANT TO SEE THEIR DESCENDANTS... WTF.... AND NOW INTO THE LATEST CHAPTER WITH THE "WESTERN GOD" HE ALSO KILLED THEM ALL.. BECAUSE ONE OF THE ENVOY HUMILIATED ONE OF HIS FRIEND.. THEY JUST WANT TO PREACH.. JIANG HE STOP THEIR MAGNIFICENT DESCENT SO OF COURSE THEY WILL GET ANGRY.. SO HE KILLED THEM ALL EVEN THO ZEUS ALREADY WANT TO JUST TALK IT OUT.. BUT NO.. HE DOESNT EVEN LET HIM FINISH HIS SENTENCE.... HIS A FUCKER...
This novel is worth it.
This is probably the highest score that I've given to anyone. Like honestly, you deserve it. I'm starting to like the first person genres now that I've read yours. It almost makes me feel as if I'm reading Percy Jackson once again. Ahh... nostalgia hit me hard. Your writing has a kind of smooth flow to it, which I'm jealous about (you should teach me how to pull those off). The character design is awesome. And since we've come to characters, I must admit, the front cover looks sick! And you've given the details in an apt manner, or so to say, not too much nor not too little. I think this balance enhances your plot more. If I have to relate to your book, I would say, Sword art online written by Rick Riordan. Overall, I really enjoyed reading most of the chapters.
Good luck!
Slow at the front but got quite exciting as the MC's background unfolds gradually. There is a slight sense of suspense that release slowly. Slightly harem but not completely typical of a game novel