Please make his just like your other book mc...the mfker takuya one...
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This story is worth it. I read urban A lot but this one is one of a kind. keep it up auThor..i can’t seem to take my mind of it.
Its begins bad but it gets better Chapter By ChapterPeople should read this if they want comedy in Fighting and want to be happy Overall I rate this chapter good
This is my favourite novel. I love the storyline and the characters, especially Lord Jiu! It is very entertaining and fun to read! Always looking forward to reading the next chapter!
the story is really interesting, the world is practically alive on it's own(the tutorial part is a bit too close to the tutorial arc of The Second Coming of Gluttony for comfort tho). My main problem here are the characters cause they are too unreasonable or completely not self aware(this may be a bit comedic at times tho), the unreasonableness is my main problem cause at times it's just not that needed or is every person on the tutorial a criminal before being reborn ? Cause dudes have not even a slight of reasonable common sense. Even the big bad villain is actually a spoiled brat that thinks he's the smartest person alive. Also it just makes no sense that the tutorial becomes an absolute bloodbath when they are literally scrapping every soldier they can to hold their defense positions, they just needed to have a bit of supervision on the first floor, just a bit and they would have 300 or so more soldiers even if just cannonfolder, but beggars can't be choosers and they clearly NEED more soldiers to remain holding their forts, it just makes no sense that they just don't care about loosing 300 potential soldiers cause of stupid stuff. Anyway mostly me ranting but it just became too unbearable to remain reading without even complaining a bit about these stuff.
Personagens como esse MC são horríveis, eles não têm personalidade, apenas sabem agir como robôs sem emoções.Totally boring apart from the fact that all humans are weak or stupid. That were just to fill the scene
Honestly one of the best books I've read on this site, this book doesn't get the recognition it deserves. Characters are very deep yet relatable at the same time and it has a very well put together an interesting world with a magic system that has been well thought out and realistic. It has a beauty to it that just kind of plays on the tragedy and dignity of the human condition. Short version read this book.
Very good story can not wait to read more, so keep it coming. Ya this a good stiry and i have to take up space so that i can post this and im surebthis has yet to reach the right amount of words to be post.
The amount of disrespect and utter garbage that is in this novel is truly surprising considering it's Asian origins. I thought Asians had great respect for their ancestors.
Since this story is about to get buried in Webnovel I figure I'll write my first review ever. Hopefully it will be found and picked up later.It's 5 stars because it has a solid premise and also has potential. I'd honestly give it 4 stars based on what is shown as of the 36 chapters here, but 99% of people seem to have a pass or fail type of rating system so I can only adjust it in the future so as to not harm the novel.For those purely desiring an overpowered system, an OP mc, a pet taming, or an extremely fast paced novel where the MC is already in core formation or tier 3 power in less than 40 chapters... this novel isn't for you. For those who want a slower paced novel (built for a 1000+ chapters easy) with a lot of world building and some hardships where the mc is actually shown to struggle.. the target audience is somewhere in this group. This story reminds me a bit of the earlier translated web novels from when translating xuanhuan and xianxia web novels started to blow up, albeit not quite at their level yet.Now, the synopsis and title may be a little misleading, but I'd still say the story so far has been oriented around the mc's clan. I am interested if it will be like this in the far future of the story though, as it seems hard to maintain since mcs usually grow too fast for their clans to keep up without what are basically cheats, so 99% of the time they get left behind. His smartphone thankfully isn't too overpowered yet and only has 2 of the functions listed as of chapter 40. Granted, the trading currency for spirit stones seems extremely broken so I kind of hope he never gets that one. The story also "skips time" pretty frequently, but it at least makes sense. In a story of immortal cultivation where the mc is cultivating at a fairly normal pace that's bound to happen as there will be lots of downtime. There is a decent amount of explaining and world building, especially at the start, which I know can turn people off.Lastly, the author is trying to give the idea that the mc is a normal cultivator struggling with his path to immortality. Alas, he is still an mc with a couple cheat codes that give him an edge.Overall, the story has potential and hopefully the author can grow with this one. It is a tough writing style/novel to attempt and it's not for everyone to like.
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