This story is very similar to "I Really Am Not The Lord of Demon" However the MC is aware of what he does. This Novel has its moments and I fall in love with some scenes... But the MC is contradictory... Hypocritical? He plays both Teams so it doesn't make much sense. He can be cruel when it's convenient for him. The world-building also lacks a huge explanation so people assume it's 'Modern Chinese Government' or something. No, it's a supernatural world setting with its supernatural department that naturally gives freedom to people. But the contradictions also hurt.. MC says he loves freedom as it builds up the person and society.. But next thing you know they're already heavily surveillance on MC. It's as if telling you it's fine for the Government to watch you, they're "good people and have good reason'' to do so... That's not freedom or is ok lol. It just feels like lowkey propaganda or something.
If your dream job is to be the fry guy at McDonalds then this novel is for you! Not trying to be too negative but I would like to point out that if your going to write a novel like this then at least teach some real-world values with some realism.Like the translators pointed out, the writer makes tons of plot holes.The quality isn't bad at first but then you get too much unnecessary dialogue later on which makes it boring to read and you guessed it, there isn't much action.
Not a bad novel, however the further into it you get the more gramatical errors there are in the translations. You will also likely find that the amounts of money he earns will changed repeatedly in a single chapter chapter 314 has the largest fluctuation ive seen so far (going from it being 31 billion earned to it being only 31 million within a few sentences)
I’ve read only until the 74th chapter but really couldn’t read further. The character interaction and development are horrible and it’s hard to find coherence. This reads like someone’s naive power fantasy where everything just falls into place because they have little understanding of other people. The conflict in the story is the MC versus his third-rate random filler character mindset; if not for the fact that there’s no actual other MC, this MC would have long been kicked to the sidelines and forgotten after ten chapters.
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer is a Wuxia novel by Jin Yong (Louis Cha). It was first serialized in Hong Kong in the newspaper Ming Pao from 20 April 1967 to 12 October 1969.Alternative Names:• Laughing in the Wind• State of Divinity• The Peerless Gallant Errant• The Proud and Gallant Wanderer• Xiao Ao Jiang Hu• 笑傲江湖Translators:• Lanny Lin (Chapter 1 - 21)• HHaung (Chapter 21)• Pokit (Chapter 21 onwards)• Bliss (Chapter 30 and 31)Editor:• HHaung (Chapter 21 onwards)The reason I'm putting up this novel is so I can read it for personal use. I watched the State of Divinity (1996 TV series) and loved that show. I knew there was a Novel of it but never spent the time to look for it until now. Was reading it online but the chapters very LONG and I keep loosing track of where I left off so I came here. Reading it off Webnovel is so much easier especially since it keeps track of where you left off. Unfortunately Webnovel has a 20k word / 100k character limit for each chapter so I had no choice but to chop up the chapters into parts.For those who also want to read this feel free. I am not taking someone else's work and passing them off as my own, full credit is given to the original writer, translators and editor as listed in the descriptions, plus the content of this novel is free online in multiple sources for everyone to read. So putting this up on Webnovel is just for my own convenience sake and anyone else who wishes to read this.
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it's great, but the grammar is bad. It shows how football is not an individual player based sport but a team sport unlike other fanfics.
I like the descriptive fights however they can become boring after a while. The world background is pretty fleshed out but there seems to be a lot that the Author still haven't shown the readers yet. The process of gaining power is pretty interesting and the explanations are good. It has so many time skips its annoying. There a like 10 time skips for multiple years and dozens of time skips that skip months.I dislike character design of the MC. His thirst for power is just utterly insane, I understand that being his over-arching goal however he just completely removes anything from his life that won't help him in gaining more power. Later on he just becomes a total sociopath. When hiding he kills anyone who enters his general area when he could easily avoid them. He regularly summons and sends hundreds of insane creatures to attack towns (btw they literally hate all living things and actually DESTROY matter/energy, their entire desire is to devour the world) just so he can have up to a 25% increase in his physical ability. A duke sets a bounty on him so he completely destroys the dukes town of over a thousand people. He also has no point for wanting power. He is willing to kill thousands of innocent people, civilians, men, women and children just so he can have pointless power. He doesn't want friendship or luxury or love or ideals. He just wants power cause he hates the feeling of being weak and not in control. His mental age is 38 but his mindset is that of an absolute child.
man we got a frcking saint here HAHAHAH, well it's not really a bad thing but man he is really emotional every chapter he always like dreaming or spitting some flowery words. is he a kid? HAHAHAHHAH
Nice update
this.book is very good what a nice love story Hope xevia can stop felling sort for her self and be confident and expose her twin sister that is more than a devil and submit that the is her son and the princence is the twin
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