Good book I think this is quite great. Esp the girl has the same name as me hana
ok, why does all the characters have white hair besides that good story
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It's a little fast paced in my opinion especially at the beginning. He doesn't have any attachment to his family figures and it seems a bit forced.The system is introduced too suddenly.Otherwise it's a very interesting concept. I put it in my library
I liked the start but the story goes downhill as it proceeds. The ML has snake code but he does not have any quality or show any quality. He is always led by his nose by other people. Snakes are cunning, lazy sharp and cruel and they do not possess any of the qualities even after the snake code changed his body. Moreover, the author just confusingly mixed technology and codes. I was at first very interested but after reading till chapter 50, my interest was lost! The whole novel introduces new ideas suddenly in some chapters to carry forward and the character of ML is poor, coward, cautious and extremely weak and have no knowledge about the world.
It's a pity. the story was decent but just so random.I also don't see myself spending a single SS on this story.There is alot to improve before signing a contract lol.
Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used.All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.
MC is a simp.Grammar/spelling is terrible. Novel is extreamly fast paced, It skips over a lot of details.Nothing really unique about this novel, its pretty much the same, once the MC gets some power it becomes a power reset over and over. Its pretty clear that the author doesnt have an outline of where to take his novel. its almost as if he wakes up in the morning and decides to go in a different direction everyday.
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Story is good, but there is a lot of confusing stuff that happens. Motivations are not told for actions that he takes as well sometimes.Also, various number of typos scattered throughout the chapters which make it more confusing.
hola autor-san, espero que puedas escribir una buena historia, sería mentir que no vine por la etiqueta del wincest, como hombre de cultura, espero poder leer un buen desarrollo de esa trama cof* cof* los mejores de saludos para tí y espero poder leer una gran obra!!!!