as of chapter 40 I'm liking it quite a bot. MC's ability is a complete cheat and it's kind of funny how effortlessly he gains power. MC is very likable.
Thais novel is trash what kind of police can execute everybody he wants and everybody thinks that its normal, the mc is retarded and the system is trash, nothing is good with this nivel i dont know how is people giving 5 stars .
This story has the interesting concept of having the MC get reincarnated into another less advanced but still modern world with a system in tow. That's something I haven't read before and when you add in the fact that the systems goal is to force him to take over the world (Much like world domination system) despite the fact that there's most likely many armies armed with modern weaponry.
So it will be interesting to see how he'll manage to claw his way up to be able to match the larger more powerful nations. The updates come at a decent rate and the character development so far seems to be good. The writing quality is also good. All in all its a good novel that's been added to my library.
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Is this novel like discontinued for translation or something?If it is that sucks :( Really wish this novel would resume translation but knowing webnovel its unlikely.
I rarely give compliments, keep the up the good work, you are doing a great job, It's a very good story, someday it might have its own franchise.
Now off to sleep, Snore zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I do quite like the style you've got going here. It's quite descriptive and gives your reader a very vivid imagery of what is going on and gives their imagination enough food to imagine some small details themselves. Which is a good thing.
Although, if I may add a small point of critique: I notice you have rather long paragraphs. In essence, there is nothing wrong with that, but quite a lot of people like shorter paragraphs, with dialogue laced through them to keep the story flowing. Rather than long paragraphs. I will admit you have shorter paragraphs near chapter 5, so I think you are on the right track! Keep up the good work!
Honestly, it's kinda ass. Just a run of the mill, MC fucks everything and everyone noteworthy and they all love him unconditionally. The plot is all laid out in front of you and is completely linear, everything happens right after the previous event, there is no returning to clean up or previous mentions of anything that happened before its just "this happens, and then that happens, and we're done". The characters don't develop in anyway, shape or form. The only "development" is that they get stronger and that's about it.Honestly not worth the read.
Written to a professional standard with excellent grammar and punctuation. A true masterpiece, with ingenious storyline and layout.10/10 would recommend a read. The author is a true artist of their work.
This story is best when you just wanna wash away the filth and muck from other crappy stories. Very wholesome and enjoyable. The story Is coming along quite well and I look forward to MOARRRRR!
Quite a decent novel. It starts off with the system being the only sci-fi thing but as the story progresses more things like monsters are added so that the mc can level up, as he was about to reach the limit in the world he was currently in. The characters are well thought out but as time goes on and the battles become repetitive, they become the only interesting encounters present. I do hope this becomes more popular as it is a good read
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