Legitimately one of the worst things I've ever read. The author constantly messes up their own numbers, changing the ranks of things willy nilly.
The story was supposed to be about alchemy, but the author quickly makes the MC perfect at literally everything. Magic, strength, alchemy.
The author constantly hammers in how hard it is to fight above your level, yet the MC's alchemical creatures are consistently able to fight 1-2 levels above themselves with extreme ease. Adding on to this, the MC makes a potion to make himself a 3-star expert, but is able to overpower a 5-star expert. How? Bad writing, that's how.
Why is it so easy to obtain legendary alchemy materials? Everybody and their grandmothers seem to have a least tier 6 alchemy materials. The materials always have some sort of mythical story behind it, but then the MC magically has 5 more. It's ridiculous.
Everything is constantly measured in the cost of gold coins, despite how very very obvious it is that the monetary system is completely made up and the numbers thrown around are entirely random.
I'm angry I've wasted any iota of my time on this sack of actual rotting garbage.
Everything in this story is good except for the unrealistic aspects like Nicole's constant pouting. you shouldn't pouting an Apocalypse no matter how stupid you are
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An earlier review. The story beginning is well done. There is long way to open up the rest of development and I am looking forward to it.[img=update]
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well I got tricked in the first 19 chapters that this is a good novel but from chapter 20 it gets trashy the mc is a absolute idiot like come man is the mc the mc or his subordinates or intruders because they get seen more and decides everything for him even things about him self
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I read this but I really can't understood how mc still immature even he reincarnated hundred times.I though he will quite scheming person and cunning but it doesn't feel to me.There's also mistakes in typos and some grammar
This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.
dude it was nice ???.so pls upload more chapters