Shameless author here, this is my first novel, i hope you guys like it. Any serious reviews will be much appreciated, ill try to meet your expectations the best i can, i wont make them a priority tho, its my novel after all.
this going to be fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Hi from a reader here. Thank you for giving us this wonderful novel to read. I just wanna tell you that keep on doing your best and we are here to support you whatever you do. Thank you for the hard work. Please guys keep supporting this novel. わたしは、あなたを愛しています.本当に、ありがとう(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
while it starts out OK, just another generic transmigration OP character arc.At some point everything changes with no explanation, seems to be multiple missing chapters and characters.
Haven't read it it yet, but the story seems promising. been kinda bored with other stories as they all follow the general plot line, with alot of plot armor. hopefully this isn't one of those stories.
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i cant help but get wet reading this novel, everything in this novel is like a sun burning mother earth to dust along with humanity this is just soo goooood and I need moarr like, the chapters are too short i need 5k+ of this novel
after reading rtw & tss then read this .... booring?? i cant understand why people recommend this but if you have insomnia i recommend this because reading this novel make me sleep zzz..zzz...zzz...????
One of my favorite novels in this site. It's a joy reading. The characters feel real. The environment descriptions are vivid. The novel is like wine, it begins very slow but gets better with time. You get attached to the characters and can't wait for new chapters to come out. The downside is a lack of comedic reliefs but maybe it will change with time.
1) I absolutely love your story and you have my addiction burning.2) The only real constructive feedback that I have for you is that when you realise you are using some words too many times (ex. Recomposing or ingress) that you use the thesaurus to give you more options to expand your vocabulary. 3) Last thing, try to utilize words that aren't a mouthful for people to read. Using a softer approach for the sentence "his ingress to the royal capital was a grand spectical to witness." could be changed to "his entrence to the royal capital was a grand sight to see." Those are just some general statements I made up, but the second sentence is far easier for people to read vice the former.4) Again I love your story and your use of some interesting vocabulary and these are just some suggestions that could help amplify your writing. THANK YOU AND I HOPE YOU GIVE THIS A READ OVER :D
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chapter 12? and more? hehehe