lost in lust

Haven't read it it yet, but the story seems promising. been kinda bored with other stories as they all follow the general plot line, with alot of plot armor. hopefully this isn't one of those stories.

First thing is first I really like the fact that the mc is different in the sense of the way that mostly all the other mc simply gain strength to become immortal or for revenge, but the Last Hunt’s protaganist  Seeks strength to reunite with his little brother. This in itself earns a good rating in my opinion. Well done author.And if I were to point out a sore spot of the story, it is as the author said, his English isn’t good. But I am certain as the author continues to write his English would also get better. For the reason I am only sure is because I have only read till the not locked chapters.Well done Author! ?? ?? ??

it's really good, at least for me, it's better than the rest of the new ones in this batch of trial read.It has the same "feel" as "senior brother is too steady" except with the system as the plot device.it's been a long time since I write a novel review in faint hope that the work is gonna get picked.

So a weaker person can defeat enemy that is stronger by one rank with tactic/weapon?Although this is not what Wuxia genre usually offerI really like your idea

This a good story. Good character, stable updates, good story development, and very good world design. I like where this story is going. Worth a try!

Watching zai mushen from side princess yue was surprised by the aura of zai mushen which wa calm, gentle and warm . White silvery hair , those ruby like red pupils and those casual smile on his childish face exuded warmth to anyone's heart not to mention her.