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theres not much info about the world he is in but this novel is good im getting excited once he got a good 3 sword xD and im waiting what kind of body did he possess it did say he's body is special
I already read the raw! I would say, it's not a bad read. Chinese reincarnated as a Japanese student, with(of course, this thing is already set in stone) a system that teach or give the MC a boost in Kendo(Sword). Anyway... I forgot what I would say... wait let me think.... It probably not that vital since I forgot it! Have a good read!
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Good story overall but the characters and how they act feels just wayyyy to unatural it feels so forced.......................................
This story has a brilliant beginning... from 'let me suck you off' to the interaction between our mc and what I imagine is a lolita+chibi vampire.... how he explains himself as being an exorcist but killed spirits once...is hilarious... this is diffent take on the mythical genre of vamps and wolves...I like it.. the pov style of the author does well to express the story very well and the path that the story will be talking..this is story has great potential... Great work author... Keep writing..
Paying for a fan fic is just ridiculous.
Pretty weak story with horrible characters.Mc gets random power ups and passes every impossible fight just by thinking of his sister and getting plot armor.Wierd disgusting ****** relationship between mc and his 10 years old.Constant flashbacks with no relevant info in the middle of a chapter for no reason.
So many grammatical errors and mismatching of the names. Definitely machine translated and poorly edited. How does this have 4.7 stars? Unbelievable.
boooooo!! he wants to be the strongest but afraid of being hurt like duhh can't you hunt for experience? you just take the system for granted and you live 2 lives but your mindset is such a kiddo so naive mc booooooooooooooooooooooooooo the system function is good but the mc don't know how to use it to the fullest and so lazy to gain experience to the world
The novel is... OK?The starting was quite fantastic and the ideas are quite good.The main problem here is why would author post useless chapters without any contents? Asking readers to read somewhere on another platform? I really hate it. There is only 'The chapters 1 to 25 or 26 to 50 are posted on Bla Bla Bla' made me mad!Why would you post chapters here? I feel like that you are using this platform as an advertisement for gathering readers.Note: I have read only first 45 chapters only.Now comes the review about story. The problem in this novel is:The main problem here is every'thing' distains MC. For god's sake, he's someone from a huge background but from the very start, even the mobs and side characters are showing distain and I'll intent toward MC as if he's a beggar and useless person.Evey single place, Every single event, MC is distained by people and MC and his supporters do not do a thing or don't even know a thing.My head hurts while reading such novels! Why would you write something like that? Is MC a mascot? Is MC a goody guy who spares everyone? I can't say...The background is very confusing. Is he someone with strong background? or is he from a normal/mid level background? Everyone distains him and makes me confused.Then the world background is also very confusing. What are the ranks of Aristocrasts? One guy says he's from Gu or whatever empire he is and show distain to MC and it turned out that he have a weak background. He was acting so arrogant that I felt that he had same background as MC. It's so bad that it started to kill my remaining brain cells.The chapters are messed. Some chapters are available on one site, while some are only available on other sites. It's so troublesome that I had to switch 3 different platforms to get a good amount of chapters to read.
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout