Emp was taken aback, he didn't know what he expected but this wasn't it. He felt like someone had just clubbed him in the back of the head when he saw her face like that. Droplets of blood flowed down from the corner of her mouth to her chin but neither of them paid any attention to it.
Why does the title and synopsis sound so similar like Ghost King's Concubine novel. Damn, is this the same or a copy or the original? The whole synopsis just told the spoiler of first 10-12 chapters. Well anyway let's see if it's a copy or not after the translations starts. I'll adjust my ratings after I read it through.
i like how the story develops, the characters are enjoyable, i personally like Zinhle, she is a well written side mc, she is relatable, i might say i didn't think her character will grow so much. keep up the good work.
it's so good and I like reading little mushroom and colonel wen they're together ❤️
Good story so far, as of chapter 40, main character is developing nicely, other characters are being flushed out as the story develops, intrigue and interest about the power system is increasing as we progress, the world stage develops and we learn about it as we progress in the story, keep up the good work Sir. AUTHOR.
plot with unimaginable thing but overall good and making to story line more about the progress of alice and exciting sory further
Early review I am on chapter 85. The story is written decently when it comes to grammar, sentence structure, etc. World background is pretty interesting everyone having the chance to unlock a system and the systems interconnect in some scenarios. MC system is op but so far mc has not really taken advantage of it. Honestly mc doesn’t make many logical choices after he unlocks the system and jumps straight into adventuring. My main gripe about the story is the author doesn’t know how to portray different age levels for different characters. Everyone in this story reacts, talks, and behaves like a 10 year old. People yelling out of surprise or having an o face when they are adults living in a world that has many people fighting monsters. Overall I like the premise of the story and really hope the maturity of the characters goes up as it progresses.
Hey, just wondering if this is in any way inspired by the Youtuber and speedrunner panga? He has a bot, which seems to have a very similar story to your bankheist dungeon, and his brand revolves around pandas too...Besides this I really like your novel, please continue it. I’m having fun catching up with the older readers.
Hello! Author here, and here is my review of this novel.There’ll be elements of bias since I’m the author, but I feel they’re all valid.Firstly, this novel follows a trope you’ve all heard of before. Classmates get reincarnated into a new world and they have to save it.Of course, the book does a little spin on some things, but you know what you’re getting.Secondly, the MC is a background character who is average at everything. His life changes once he gets his hands on an OP Skill that acts as his golden finger.He’s very pragmatic and calculating, but he’s not a genius, so don’t expect 1,000,000 IQ from him.Thirdly, it’s a progressive fantasy, so the story evolves (including the worldbuilding and many interesting aspects of it) the more you read and the further you go.There are many unique aspects of the book, and it’s very easy to grasp what it’s all about once you start reading it. I won’t spoil anything here, but I’d really urge you to give it a try.Of course, this novel isn’t for everyone so after the tenth chapter, if you don’t like what you’re reading, then maybe it’s just not your cup of tea.I’d like it if you were active in the comments and let me hear your thoughts. Please be nice and cordial since I’m a human with a heart too.Thanks for reading this review, and I hope you have a good time with the novel.Cheers!
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I was immediately hooked from the first chapter. A bit confusing but interesting, everything makes more sense with each successive chapter. Excited to see how it unfolds and liking the Overlord elements.
Kon'nichiwa I can't and refuse to be ashamed of my book. ?Although my writing style or portrayal of the world might be a bit strange to you all. Grammar is well umm...well...Reasonable constructive criticism and not straight out dissing is welcome ??u200d♀️This is my first system novel and I don't know how suiting it is to you readers ?hence my ratings. From the first arc(volume) the character takes a trip to an alternate world and how he developed his antihero character. ~Although I don't know if the reason for him taking this course seems plausible to you all ?Starting from the next arc(volume) deals with him infiltrating an organisation which had a big play in what he had become.The remaining arc should be determined by you readers ?. You could drop your interpretation of the arc once the chapters for it are up.There are subtle references to anime scenes or character as my character does love anime [*cough *cough so do I], so you could drop them here if you spotted them.Any questions you have on the book could be asked here! I'd try to answer to the best of my ability while keeping it vague if you are asking for spoilers.Arigatōgozaimasu