But I suppose I could check up on Fuyumi and Natsuo after I wash up.
Amanda stopped in front of it, took a deep breath, tilted her head back, cupped her hands around her mouth and shouted as loud as she could. "HEY, I GOT FOOD!!!!"
I admit ur pacing is too fast but whats done is done so even if u will end this novel prematurely at least it will have ending or u could just make mc travel to different world and somehow make him seek new power or nerf him a little bit, i suggest going to dxd world or campione.Now take his harem members as well if he went to dxd make him reborn as issei to get boosted gear but make him a new faction leader rather than typical devil maybe make him demon rather than devil just like meliodas maybe? 7 deadly sin or 10 commandments.That should prolong ur novel, just my idea no need to rush as long u dont drop every novel u created...
Loja Dimensional
Suddenly the two thousand years that he had waited for her became mere numbers and ceased to matter. The elf princess stirred in her sleep before her eyes fluttered open nearly giving the Count a heart attack. She had the greenest most beautiful, most expressive eyes he had ever had the pleasure of seeing. He gazed into their child-like innocence and was humbled.
As he came closer, his features began to increase in clarity. Those same pair of dark eyes which seemed to be carrying a deep intensity whenever they looked at her. His expression that always looked indifferent, and the lips that never seemed to smile.
"No welcome home?"
Mi princesita -> Little princess
Plz more chapters. It’s a very interesting story
And then...pain.
(Hiruzen) "He says the truth Asuma, like the Inuzuka they treat the other members as family before subordinates, so you will not attack them."
Naruto was truly angered at this point. First of all, he did not want to display so much of his abilities this early in the Chunin Exam. He had been seething with anger when he had been forced by Orochimaru to almost reveal his Sharingan. Now this crazy woman was going mental on him trying to extract information from him.