I enjoyed reading this book. From startt to finish. I like the development ojf the story that i almost could not put the book down. Sadly ☹️☹️ it was cut. Please bring on the next chapters. Pleeeeaaaaassssseeee.
This is basically the best novel out of the trial read on now and it's got thr worst reviews. So what if it's a copy, many other copies got good reviews
Amazing new concept of story of MC being lowkey, i even read the mtl haha.That system is really no help to MC except for the end of his life span and breakthrough.
Needs more updates and more updates updates and updates! This is a very good story just speed it up a little and get to the fighting and killing! You should add the MC having *** with his sisters or raping them! Make a harem!
This is a comedy. Our MC is an idiot pure and simple. He is always off doing something that eventually gets him into trouble. This is more of a slice of life, and is to be read just for kicks.
Harem is ???.........i don't know what I'm gonna say just keep up the good work........ hahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahh
The story is interesting. The story is unique compared to others. POV is used in a surprising way, which lets you feel the emotion of characters.Overall as a new author, he is doing a fabulous job.But his grammar and spellings need to get an improvement.
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That Luo Weiwei is unnecessary??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Not really a valid or particularly interesting review here. Just don't like what I've seen and I've decided hey! I should review this! In essence this is the quintessence of maybe good ideas without good execution. My bar for Trial reads couldn't be anymore low but here I am still disappointed again and again. At least we got a Zhou Yi instead of John but Is my bar so low however to make this a five star review? Nope and Goodbye.
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i gave this book an honest chance but please dont waste your time. i read until ch25 and came out more confused than i ever. also considering theres only positive comments left on this book, i dont see how the author is not deleting bad comments. i cant even give constructive criticism because i cant make sense of this story. i started with hating the MC and by ch25, i now hate the author. i honestly feel like i lost brain cells by reading this.