Hunterofoblivion
"Look, just keep them off of me while I'm working on Sensei," Nichiren said.
It was how you felt when somebody mentions that close friend or a relatives' name from a stranger.
This is my second review as I feel it needed another one….the story can be predictable at times but there’s only so much a human can do to make things unpredictable…Khione needs to come back and once she does this is automatically a 5 star
"heh! but that was in the past i'm not scared anymore~!"
I have been following this story since its start and I fail to understand why it has 4.2 stars overall. The plot is wonderful and cultivation method is truly unique and mysterious. Given that's it's the most popular light novel in china it deserves 5 stars
I'm only 2 chapters in and the author NEEDS TO FIX the jumping back and forth between genders is the mc a guy? or a girl? it switches so much it gets very confusing and it's not just mc the side charater it happens as well, if you translating plz make sure you are going back and fixing any issues that occurs being posting
I am currently at chapter 851, the story so far has decent world build character growth (MC) and some kingdom building elements. The story is pretty basic, however it is still entertaining and and enjoyable read. If you like the concept of gu and evolution of abilities, you should give it a read. There is only one major translation issue, that come with the demon clans. There are two different clans but they are called the same thing so it’s impossible to know which is being referenced. Once I a while there is some misgendering but that doesn’t really happen that often. I would say give this a try, it might be your cup of tea.
"Well, they can always focus on offensive spells rather than supporting reckless people like I am... I mean was... Anyway, let's prepare. Don't forget that if you die here, you'll respawn in our guild hall so try not to die. Our goal for this training is for all of us to survive until the end." I hope we're all ready for this.
The overall content is very good and interesting
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I found this story very interesting, it reminds me of how I lived going to the library looking for a book to read, but then I met the novels and webnovels, I fell madly in love.When did I leave the chapters? I also want to know the time zone, because I get lost with the time difference.
This is the author with a shameless 5 star review (I don't think there is any author who wouldn't give his story 5 stars) so I'll review it in steps. MAIN CHARACTER-The protagonist Rey is a genius with an idiotic behaviour and is quite annoying. I also get annoyed by him. But there is a backstory which I hope to explore and there is a reason for his actions, so if you could bear with him. It is not weak to strong because the mc is already strong but there will be change in his attitude and behaviour which will help him become a better version of himself. The MC will not be completely op for now, might change depending on what I feel and what you guys say.PLOT-The plot, to understand easily will be like a vrmmorpg but in a real world without any tower or dungeons (if that makes it easier). There are many novels in which there is a system that can talk but I wanted to create a system which is very much human and isn't defined by the system rules, so the plot for me is pretty interesting. WRITING-Now this is tricky. I won't say I am good or what I have written is good because I still don't think what I have written is good enough. So that is something you guys will have to read and decide. But I do know that 50 chapters later the writing won't be the same cause I will try to improve on it. PACING-I honestly don't know whether I am going slow or fast because I try to be as descriptive as possible so that you as readers can imagine what I am thinking and that might make it slow paced. I am fairly new, so sometimes it might be fast or sometimes slow. ROMANCE-There won't be a harem and romance will not be coming anytime soon. Though there is and the first to guess, I'll add your character in the story.
