I havent read this book yet, but its looks exciting and fun, just read the first chapter and will read it for sure, keep on update author dont give up, cant wait for the next chpater, cheeeeeerssssssss......[img=recommend]
While vampire stories are not my favorite or even prefered genre, the story is quite good and very intriguing. There are some small granmar issues and the dialogue sometimes feels forced and unnatural. But its nothing granmarly cant fix. The flow of the story is really good and I can already imagine the epic adventure about to happen!
I love this book and I love how the ideas come together to give me this Joy and flow. I love the fact that It's as though I am watching the story rather than reading it
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had to drop at chapter 5 because of the grammer and broken english please get an editor .....................................................
Woowww Loving the world you have built the story already got me hooked right into... The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed. Can't really wait to read what happens next!!
It’s just ok. I feel like I read something really similar a long time ago where after he opens his share group and saves the CEO’s company he meets and saves the daughter?The he/she thing does seem to be getting worse though. It’s like they’re not even putting in the effort anymore lol.Also, the entitled gold digger thing really makes me look down on people.Hop she’s gone soon.
this actually has a good idea, but there are still some shortcomings that need to be improved such as the storyline and the depiction of the world's background in this novel.
Let me give you a quick review about the themes that you will find in this book.-Hot-blooded protagonist-Crazy and Strong Minded Female Leads-Cute A.I. with mysterious system-Acquired Talent-Evolving Martial Spirit-Cultivation Techniques and Martial Arts-Sect Battles and Kingdom Battles-Humans and Monsters Battles-Unique Dream of the Protagonist-Amazing Journey with lots of ActionsI hope you are ready for a new adventure of a new protagonist in the cultivation world where he sets out in journey to get something that he doesn't have to fulfill his dream.
This is a really interesting read. I love the mystery at every turn of the story. I also really like how the FL isn't overtly swooning over the ML. She exhibits independence and strength in her own way, even if she does think the ML is undeniably hot?And I can foresee character developments along the way. Keep writing!
I appreciate this story so so much and to be honest I'm kind of hurt that it is so vastly underrated. I even tried to give power stones to it and I was unable to do so but even so alone me to say that this story's development regarding the characters and the world itself are all top-notch. To be honest I have finished it somewhere else and I can say that it only gets better and does not let down at all I implore every and anyone to give the story a read even though it's cultivation based. This is one that I think anyone would enjoy.
Utter crap.